wow deep 'n' dark...but still good!

absolutely loved it...i love how you wrote it, and you didn't even see the episode yet! YOU GOT SOME SKILL!! =D

very well written, and impressive for not seeing the episode.

Lovely. So much said in such a short story. This was very true to character and really gave a sense of Shawn's inner self without resorting to girly melodrama. Well done!

this is a very impressive piece if writing. i love all of your discriptive words and phrases. they all smooth together very nicely. great, great work =) write more!!

this is very good story.

Very nice! "...a slightly changed version of his reality." I liked that. Thanks for writing! :o) DA

Very nice! You captured the emotions perfectly. Thanks!