What? Why would chirping birds be outside a 8th or 9th floor window? The only birds up there would be pigeons and maybe a hawk, and neither chirp.
Other than that, this is a good story. Well done.

i reall liked this story, but honestly it would never happen.

THIS IS A KIDS SHOW!

Really hot. Creddie rules. :)

I liked it,but a bit inopropriete.I'm only 8.

*giggles and laughs* The unused chapter names are names of songs! (That's funny)

It was a good story. Long enough and easy to read.

wow! nice story this is one of my faves stories in !

Sex bomb... Lol. Good story but you seriously need to come up with better back up names for chapters. Sex bomb mightve been the only good one cause it was funny.

I love this story so far XD CREDDIE! 3

All I have to say is that Freddie is one lucky guy xD

“Freddie, your hands, they feel so good, I want you to touch me again.”

lol. I like that part. And once again, you're awesome. I love this story!

Hehe I found that hot xD Good job.

Loved it.(: Very good.

Ha! Brunette boy and blonde girl meeting up in the morning is quite an unexpected twist. This "extension" could have made a pretty nice TV movie out of iSpeedDate, though the Creddie lovemaking would not have made it out of a children's show.

Kudos again. :)

yay, looking forward to the next part

I love this so far. Hope to read more soon.