this is a site for fanfiction as in fictional stories for actual books that have been published like the Last Survior series. fictionpress is a site for made up stories that have never been published. I seriously sugest taking this story down or you could get reported.

Yeah the site is called

Just thought you should know.

As for the story, it needs major improvements, such as grammar and spelling and such.

Umm, this is cool and all, but this isn't even Fan-Fiction. There's a website for this. It's called and you should check it out, because it's a website for stories that are fictional.