I really enjoyed this fic. It's one of the few that I truely could see happen if I were watching the anime. It could use a little work in terms of how you word things. For example, you are adept at giving the reader a vivid mental picture through your descriptions, but you also have a tendency to repeat yourself by accident. Also, this fanfic could easily be extended. Perhaps in your spare time you could extend it after the storm (I would LOVE that! ^_^) Anyway, overall, this was a fantastic story and I hope that you will consider extending it further!