 Bonuskun 11/18/11 . chapter 1 The sun had just come out when I finally could make out what was happening in the apartment building across the street. I gasped when I saw the actions taking place. By the window I could see the man who I've met on occasion, his name is Lord Kelvin. A nice old man with a nice sturdy body. He was by the window head back in the sun as another older man who I've never seen before kneeling in front of him sucking his cock. I smiled as Lord Kelvin grabbed the man by the back of his head and pushed his cock even deeper into the mans throat.
Before I even knew it my hand was in my pants rubbing my now swollen cock. Never before has such an act turned me on. For sure I've seen my share of gay pornos but never have they turned me on. Maybe this is because I was seeing it in person. Maybe this was because I wished his mouth was on my cock.
I grabbed my reclining chair and dragged it to the window and stripped. I have to say I'm a pretty fit guy. I almost have a six pack, my penis while flaccid was four and a half inches and erect as it is right now is seven inches in length. I have a pretty thick penis although I have never thought to measure it. I have my brown pubes, that match my hair, are shaved into a nice V on my crotch. I don't bother to shave any of my chest hair since I love the feeling of a women rubbing against it.
With my cock in hand I grab my binoculars and watch the men across the road from me. I started slowly pumping my penis in my dominant hand, my right as my left hand held the binoculars that let me view the beautiful act taking place in front of me. I see Lord Kelvin moving his cock in and out of the mans mouth his movements getting faster. His body goes stiff and he jolts.
"Oh my god" is all I can whisper. The man sticks his tongue out on the end of Lord Kelvins penis and let's the cum shoot into his mouth. At this moment I'm beside myself, my breath growing heavier and heavier. I start to moan as I feel myself coming to an orgasm. I have to stop myself from masturbating so I can go longer. I look back into the binoculars to see Lord Kelvin leading the man around the corner. I freeze. I want to do something right now. I run to my kitchen naked searching for my cell phone.
"Damn! It had to be here!" I yell. I find it under my briefcase and search for the name I need.
Lord Kelvin.
I find his name as dial the number and to my relief he answers.
"Hello Bonuskun, you need something." He says. I shake my head in frustration. What do I say?
"Umm, yeah. Can I please come over and borrow some flour I'm in the middle of making some pie for my family that's coming over in about forty minutes and I don't have time to go to the store." I say as fast as I can. I hear Lord Kelvin groan, something must be happening.
"Yeah...sure. Come over." he says. I quickly pull on my jock strap and grab a pair of sweat pants along with a tight fitting tee. I run out of my house and fly down my stairs and before I know it I'm at his door knocking on it fiercely.
Lord Kelvin answers it only in a towel from the waist down exposing his sixty year old chest. I cast a fast glance down to his slowly growing bulge.
"Come on in Bonuskun." He says grabbing my shoulder and pulling me in. He leads me to his kitchen where he pulls out his flower an a plastic bag. "Take as much a you want." He says. "I'll be right back." Lord Kelvin says and goes to his living room. I look at him and accidentally slam my head into the cupboard when I turn back. The sound was loud enough to be the sound of a door closing.
Thats when I hear the feet. I turn to see a man walk out of Lord Kelvins room cock straight up and his hand rubbing the head.
"Lord Kelvin? The kid gone ye-," The man stops. I gasp in surprise when I see the man. I once knew him as TRGTS, my coach at Flemington High. His eyes move up my body. "Bonuskun? Bonuskun Sillenger? This is s surprise..um." I see him grab a dish towel from the counter and cover his man hood my mind goes into hyper drive, this is the moment I've been waiting for.
"It's okay Coach. I didn't realize Lord Kelvin had company." I stare at his stone face. He has to be around his late sixties, because when I graduated eight years ago he was around fifty eight. His body is still toned and his abs were great. I only glanced at his penis once when he set foot in the room.
I take a step towards him and slowly push away the dish towel he held in front of his penis.
"Bonuskun, what are you..." TheRealGoodyTwoShoes says. His eyes locked on mine. I silence him with a finger on his lips. I make him drop the dish towel to the ground. I look down to stare at his erect penis. It had to be about eight and a half inches long. Slowly but surely I grabbed his penis in my hand and started stroking it. He moans in pleasure. "Bonuskun this isn't right, I'm your teacher plea-" I silence him when I press my lips against him, my first kiss with another man. His hand automatically goes for my groin. I feel his hand grab my balls and I moan in pleasure. TheRealGoodyTwoShoes pulls down my sweat pants to reveal my jock strap.
"Still wearing the jock I see" TheRealgoodyTwoShoes laughs. I groan as he puts his hand in the pouch and feels my bag. I gasp in pleasure as he slowly kneads my balls. I let go of his rock hard penis and pull of my shirt as I do I see Lord Kelvin round the corner stop and he drops the can of beer he hold in his left hand in shock. Then when TheRealGoodyTwoShoes pulls down my jock revealing my rock hard dick his shocked expression turns into a wide grin.
"When you moved in across the street five years ago my friend Donna said you were a trouble maker, but when I first met you I thought 'Hey these people got this kid all wrong, hes nice!' Bonuskun, as I can now see, you are more then a trouble maker." After Lord Kelvin finished he dropped the towel around his waist to the floor revealing his lets go of my balls and steps away we all stand around staring at each other waiting for one of us to make the first move.
"So you two are fully acquainted now Owen?" Lord Kelvin asks TRGTs. I squirm a little at the firmness in Lord Kelvin's voice but TherealGoodytwoshoes on the other hand grunts then laughs.
"I knew this kid way before you did, always thought he was into guys. Wait. He was into guys, I even heard him boasting about loosing his virginity to the quarterback I also remember him being the first one in the shower after soccer practice."THeRealGoodyTwoShoes says. Lord Kelvin raises an eyebrow.
"You taught him?" Lord Kelvin asks.
"Grades Eight through Twelve." TheRealGoodyTwoShoes smiles. I back away a little my penis has begun to deflate. Whats going to happen?
"Well Bonuskun is already naked, I don't see the point of me sending him home." Lord Kelvin says. "I guess, if he is up for it. He can join our little fun." Lord Kelvin walks towards me his penis swaying in front of his wrinkled body. He puts a hand on my penis causing a surge of energy rush through my body making my penis rock hard in seconds. He smile and begins pulling on it. I close my eyes and lean against the wall behind me. I feel my penis become slippery and wet, I moan and groan as I feel Lord Kelvin's lips and tongue give me the best blowjob ever. I feel hands pull me off the wall. I am now standing straight up in the middle of the hallway when I feel my ass cheeks part. I open my eyes in fear. Is he going to penetrate me without lube! Oh no! I imagine TRGT'S penis behind my ass and plunging in. He would rip me in two with his penis. But instead of a penis I feel his tongue lapping at my hole. I groan in pleasure. I grab my now hardening nipple and begin to squeeze as the others begin to work magic on my penis and my tight pink hole. I start to really get into it. I thrust my hips forward into Lord Kelvin's mouth where he licks and tongues my penis. In and out of his mouth I go. Then when I feel as if I might explode they both stop. I stare at them for a few moments.
"Why?" I ask.
"We thought we might take this to the bedroom."TheRealGoodyTwoShoes says. I smile happily as they both put their hands on my ass and lead me into the bedroom. |
 gabo0 6/2/09 . chapter 1I've been raised as a Christian and I can't remember for the world who is hell are these two. I'm guessing and archangel and a demon, but can't really place them. Still, it was beautiful. I've made a quick 30-minute scan on the Bible-slash section and I've become a believer! There are very well-written stories here, gosh, I loved yours. I'm shocked.. in a good way. |
 asdfgggggggghjkll 4/10/07 . chapter 1i actually really like this
i was in the whole 'dubious state of mind' thing because i thaught 'what if i get hit by some kind of lightning bolt' but i ignored that thaught and went right ahead. it made me sniffle, i really want to give Raphael a hug now |
 Outspoken Lamb 7/11/06 . chapter 1Why is it that I'm getting drawn to bible!slash more and more because of well written stories? *sigh* I guess I'm destined to go to hell... |
 Oracular Echo 5/16/06 . chapter 1So SAD! :( But Raphael and Asmodeus together is beautiful, especially the former crying for Michael, his fellow arch-angel. You've inspired me to write Bible fanfiction! I mean, I have already, but not in this way. Nice! And now I wonder the story behind this little vignette. |
 gundamgrrl5 7/7/05 . chapter 1 I read your paragraph in your user page. I understand but your a really good writer and I would like it if you updated darkness is golden because I'm dieing to know what going to happen. Good writers need to keep writing _. |
 Xtians Suck 5/23/05 . chapter 1 I like anything that upsets Christians, because they are the most evil people on the planet. So bravo on this great story! |
 moron 5/9/05 . chapter 1 this story sucks, but anyway, anyone got any sick stories?
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the sweet smell of hot holy shit, wish i had found it! |
 Son Of Evil 4/1/05 . chapter 1This is really cool. Going on favs. |
 gundamgrrl4 3/1/05 . chapter 1 You need to update!
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 Wayfarer09 11/29/04 . chapter 1 Disturbingly sweet, very intriguing. Poor Raphael. :( Been avoiding this fic for a while, only because I didn't want to see an Angel tortured like this - but mortal curiosity got the best of me, and it is quite dismal and I enjoyed it in a disturbing sort of way. Future chapters? Would be lovely. |
 Xris 11/3/04 . chapter 1 Quite good, and I hope it's not totally over. It has the taste of bittersweet chocolate, to sound poetic, and we all know how addictive that taste is. |
 Dinah 2/10/04 . chapter 1 ooh.. this is *good*!
Dinah |
 Katronette my computer won't let me sign in 8/27/02 . chapter 1 Wow... This is an amazing story. The emotion is very vivid, even though this is just a snapshot of what's going on. It's disturbing and certainly very interesting. Please, write more like it. |
 Delerious Facade 2/17/02 . chapter 1Very well written I have to say. It is sort of the genre I've frequented in time. It was quite short though. Maybe you could attempt to either write what happened before the story started or expand on the ending and create something long out of it. Very good I will say. You have my congratulations. Write more like it. |