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kind-of-heart
2009-12-18 . chapter 1
Me liky
Nayru-chan
2009-12-07 . chapter 1
That was yum. :'D
I liked the idea of including sole dialogues in the story. It left a few things to the imagination, still leaving an idea what was really going on. I liked that a lot. <3
darkX0Xninja
2009-11-15 . chapter 1
O_O

>/<

i can't block out the images appearing in my mind...
-sweatdrop-
Anon.
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
Even though you didn't say who was who, it was still pretty darn awesome! I usually hate fics written in this 'script' format, but this was GOOD! Amazing!

UPDATE PROPERTY OR I'LL CHEW YER HEAD OFF!! RAWWR
fate
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Omg poorr allen xD kanda is such a jerk xDD
Erendyce
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
YES! That was definitely great. And funny. And cool. And so totally made my day!
TeenageGraffiti
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
I'm not a big fan of a dialogue form in fanfics, but I really enjoyed this one. It was funny and cute while I imagined all the places where descriptions should've been. I think you really hit the nail when you put in the story just their 'conversation', because it immeasurably raised the humour of the situation.
Great job! : )
AlcoholicTree
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
*chuckles* hehe thats one hell of a funny fic! thanks so much for writing!
dragonheart3
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
Lol, poor Allen struggling with his math homework. Sheesh, that's how I feel like. "Damn. What am I missing?"

You know what this reminds me of? It's like the special music CDs that they sell for certain animes. There's a story line to all of them, but you only hear their voices, so you have to imagine.
Congrats! You wrote a whole story based on dialogue only.
naritha
2009-10-31 . chapter 1
Lovely little fic!
And the dialogue thingwas really very interesting and enjoyable(and funny too!)!
allPod
2009-10-31 . chapter 1
This was actually enjoyable. The overdominance of dialogue made this rather...unique. It made it so clear how speech alone is enough to form a story that made sense.

I really liked the transition from frustration to seriousness to surprise to annoyance to...uhh...hm...

Allen's adorable, as always...and apparently still on bottom...as always... Not that I mind. lol.
Onna Ran
2009-10-31 . chapter 1
Ahahaha.. You know I like this story. Love the style, it's so different than others..
Nice work..
lovergirl85
2009-10-31 . chapter 1
Aw...poor Allen! And all he wanted to do was his math!! Granted between math and Kanda...not that hard of a choice ;D
Anonymous
2009-10-31 . chapter 1
That was so great! I've never seen anyone pull of smut with just dialogue before. You rock!
zerokanda
2009-10-31 . chapter 1
...I forgot to laugh.

Nahh, joking. It was funny. Kanda playing with words is just...impossible. ^^ Love him still!
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