 kind-of-heart 2009-12-18 . chapter 1Me liky |
 Nayru-chan 2009-12-07 . chapter 1That was yum. :'D
I liked the idea of including sole dialogues in the story. It left a few things to the imagination, still leaving an idea what was really going on. I liked that a lot. <3 |
 darkX0Xninja 2009-11-15 . chapter 1O_O
>/<
i can't block out the images appearing in my mind...
-sweatdrop- |
 Anon. 2009-11-10 . chapter 1 Even though you didn't say who was who, it was still pretty darn awesome! I usually hate fics written in this 'script' format, but this was GOOD! Amazing!
UPDATE PROPERTY OR I'LL CHEW YER HEAD OFF!! RAWWR |
 fate 2009-11-02 . chapter 1 Omg poorr allen xD kanda is such a jerk xDD |
 Erendyce 2009-11-01 . chapter 1YES! That was definitely great. And funny. And cool. And so totally made my day! |
 TeenageGraffiti 2009-11-01 . chapter 1I'm not a big fan of a dialogue form in fanfics, but I really enjoyed this one. It was funny and cute while I imagined all the places where descriptions should've been. I think you really hit the nail when you put in the story just their 'conversation', because it immeasurably raised the humour of the situation.
Great job! : ) |
 AlcoholicTree 2009-11-01 . chapter 1*chuckles* hehe thats one hell of a funny fic! thanks so much for writing! |
 dragonheart3 2009-11-01 . chapter 1Lol, poor Allen struggling with his math homework. Sheesh, that's how I feel like. "Damn. What am I missing?"
You know what this reminds me of? It's like the special music CDs that they sell for certain animes. There's a story line to all of them, but you only hear their voices, so you have to imagine.
Congrats! You wrote a whole story based on dialogue only. |
 naritha 2009-10-31 . chapter 1Lovely little fic!
And the dialogue thingwas really very interesting and enjoyable(and funny too!)! |
 allPod 2009-10-31 . chapter 1This was actually enjoyable. The overdominance of dialogue made this rather...unique. It made it so clear how speech alone is enough to form a story that made sense.
I really liked the transition from frustration to seriousness to surprise to annoyance to...uhh...hm...
Allen's adorable, as always...and apparently still on bottom...as always... Not that I mind. lol. |
 Onna Ran 2009-10-31 . chapter 1Ahahaha.. You know I like this story. Love the style, it's so different than others..
Nice work.. |
 lovergirl85 2009-10-31 . chapter 1Aw...poor Allen! And all he wanted to do was his math!! Granted between math and Kanda...not that hard of a choice ;D |
 Anonymous 2009-10-31 . chapter 1 That was so great! I've never seen anyone pull of smut with just dialogue before. You rock! |
 zerokanda 2009-10-31 . chapter 1...I forgot to laugh.
Nahh, joking. It was funny. Kanda playing with words is just...impossible. ^^ Love him still! |