This chapter was so good that it made me cry through the whole thing. Good job on the chapter!

I like this story

really gud chapt

Hi :) Do you always let us know when a part of the chapter was deleted?

Ugh! I'm loving the story but i wish the whole thing was In one site :(

This is one of my favorite stories of all time. I have reread it a couple of times and it is amazing

So you can't read straight off of Fanfiction?

Holy, that was so good.

Emmett is so off base here. This was a very tough chapter...

I loved this journey. Once I started reading i couldn't stop. I should have to expect great things from the author of "The Fairytale Continues," "My First Year As A Cullen," & "Year Two of Forever."

This week I started my job as a daycare worker, and reading about the little Cullen "tadpoles" and wished that the little demons-I mean kiddies, I just wished that they were this adorable & obedient. But a girl can only dream. Now I am off to sleeping & Hopefully editing a LOT of YouTube videos. But in my free time I'm reading the The Fairytale Continues trilogy & hopefully somemore My-Bella stories. I will also try to frequent the/writers.

Couldnt get over that first one: "my eggos are preggos!" beautiful!

Um, I didn't really get the baby flying monkeys and wicked witch joke... Care to explain?

Mudhole in ass description- beautiful!

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I know that Bella was having a *really good* dream about Edward, but was she um... Just humping him or was there some sort of *ahem* stimulation going on? Not gunna lie, but I was a little confused but also wanted a better picture. Maybe Bella's next fantasy can consist of Edward telling some more of those 'Numb' jokes. Haha

I also enjoyed the cute little ... What's the word? Ode (? Not the word I'm looking for) to BD with Ed leaving a note, at least that's how I saw it.

#OHSNAP! Charlie is gunna pistol whip some ppl!

Speechless Alice is always a sight to be held!

I loved this story so much, words cannot describe it properly! It was as long as an actual book, which is beyond refreshing, and you are either a mom, or know one with a young child. I had so many moments throughout the story where I was thinking " Oh my God, that is so true!" even more do with the pregnancy and baby chapters. You took time to get your information right, the characters had challenges that could ACTUALLY happen, and so many times where I either cried, or laughed so hard I cried. Thank you for sharing your phenomenal talent with the rest of us! I have read a few of your stories and know without a doubt I would like to read them all. Like I said, words cannot describe how great this was, but I'm sure with your mad writing skills, you could find something worthy!

Randomness: so as Pele, luck, God & date would have it, I saw "Welcome to the Rileys" sometime late last week & it stars Kristen Stewart & is set in NO. The reason I remembered this is because her character "Mallory" ordered a "po'boy" and brought me back to this. Thanks for the memories & laughs. If you havent seen it I suggest it. It is rated "R" for a reason, but still a really good movie overall. Impo of course.

*in such shock right now (& I love it!)* I knew-thought-knew-thought that Ed was NN, but wasn't too sure. Nice work. You and EA are really good with suspense!