Aw, it was really very nice of you to do something like this. I love fan art. Thank you, Cydra.

Good to see the changes instituted, well, most, anyhow. I hope the final chapter's really big and beautiful.

This is a very excellent story, great start

Can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter, Cydra! I feel so psyched. :D

Are you kidding? A Mewtwo strikes back parody? With Negamorph? And you're not even doing a good job of it! Way too many lines from the movie, buddy. Those lines don't fit the characters you're using. The only decent moment is when Hamsterviel shouts his "hamster-like, hamster-like" line. Please tell me this is not canon in the AOE saga.

I'm so glad to see this story up! I'm going to go advertise it via "Deviantart". And make me some fanart for you! :D