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This is amazing :D
I love it so much.. I lol'd a lot XD
The witty argument between Emily and Dyer is really good, you managed to maintain it childish even if they're talking about..eh.. adult stuff?
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(This is the very beginning of Emily/Laurence.)<3

LOL! Very nice. While reading, I have often wondered what Emily would make of all that. And I love her remarks at the end, as well. I can't seem to stop myself from imagining something between them when she's older.

Your stories always make me grin.

Well, except when they don't... nothing to laugh about people drowning.

It's really a lot like the books, warm-hearted and likeable characters most of the time, but entirely serious at other times.

Haha this is great...I love reading stories from Emily's POV!

I love it, like always... You are so much better than me at this! :D

Aww this is cute!

Funny fanfic :)