Cool story and I am enjoying the plot. Please update soon and you are a good writer.

Hey i LOVE this fic. you need to finish it fast alond with the Buffy the high school student sequel i love that one too good fic

oooooooooookie dokie... tha' was... interestin... tha' thing bout Harmony was HILARIOUS! PLEASE don't break up Xander and Anya! they're the longest lastin' couple through-out the whole series! 3 freakin years! i almost CRIED when Xander left her! more soooooooooooooon! nina

there's nothing wrong with longish sentences, it's actually far more interesting (personally) to read longer sentences mixed with shorter ones than just short ones, as they tend to come across as choppy when too many are strung together...good luck :)

That was great! Please keep writing!

I'm confused. Spike seems very chipless...

Yes! You put up a new chapter! Please continue.

Continue please!

yes, she's being a major bitch! this girl better get her act together SOON! more ASAP nina

great story hope you write more soon

I think Spike and the Scooby's should go back to L.A. and Sppike should ignore Buffy for a while just for her being bicthy to him!

yay! Smoochies! :) More soon!

that was a cool story. if your writing more, i'd like to see it soon. if not, ah well. good job

Aww poor Spike! That was some welcome back party.

Yay he's going back to Sunnyhell! Goody! We need a reunion soooooooo bad! And are you trying to make me like Riley? Well quit it, it's weird! Though the idea of him and Harm is kinda...cute, lol. And him giving advice and encouraging Spike? Wow. Just W O W! More?