Wow, that was amazing, I can't believe you came up with that all on your own. It was cool.

awesome chapter...I like how you describe everything in great detail. :)

That was great. Lance's story was so interesting...I can't wait to see how Aura's story unfolds! :) You ROCK!

Great job, that was cool, and absolutely interesting.

Please continue soon!

:D

That was interesting to read. I would love to see where this story is going. It is so far extremely intriguing.

I like your writing style. :)

Hm...interesting. Who is Lance?