Hey! So I'm back with a review finally. Sorry about that :( And yes, this was one of your best Detty endings. Wonderfully sweet and romantic. I think you can probably hear the collective happy sigh around the world as you read it ;). As always I'm amazed at your never ending fountain of ideas for the Detty dynamic and I really enjoy the stories you write about them. Just keep an eye on your grammar and spelling as it can be distracting for a reader and break the flow of your fic. Otherwise, another great piece of storytelling :D. I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Thanks :).

Great storie, more soon!

loved it good job :>

update soon good job :>

Nice work. I love Detty stories! One grammar error - there's no such thing as "me and Daniel". It's "Daniel and I" or "Daniel and myself" depending on the context in which they have to be used. Keep up the good work!

Great chapter, more soon!

nice job! :)

good job update soon:>

poor daniel :( great ch :)

Great chapter, more soon!

this is getting better i hope daniel isnt too mad and i hope betty realise just how much she enjoyed herself update soon

Daniel was too cute in this :). Great stuff! And the plot thickens...it's definitely going to be a night to remember. I'm interested to find out exactly who's jealousy is going to lead to the startling revelations and realisation of feelings. You've got me hooked! But that's to be expected, I've always been a fan of all your Detty fics ;D. On a more technical note, your narrative will be even stronger if you keep a closer eye on your punctuation. Keep up the good work! More soon please! Thanks :)

Great chapter, more soon!

Awesome! I loved it. Finally more Detty fanfics! Keep it up!

yeah for fast update! nice job! i always did like Daniel shaved rather than not.
in this chapter (not so much last chapter), you always seem to be chopping off words especially like in the first paragraph.