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eddog2323
2009-08-28 . chapter 5
It isd a good story. If you are having trouble with coming up with any ideas for any story. Here is what I do when I'm stuck. It won't last forever. I keep in the back of my mind and the I will read others authors story or stories of that same subject and completed or I watch it on youtube. So never give up one you will have an Idea. I'm work on a Ranma 1/2 story. Sometime give the chapters name will also work.
cu
2006-10-30 . chapter 9
I realy liked this story. it's nice and sweet, but still has some meet to it.
Materia-Blade
2006-05-03 . chapter 5
Mary... Sue alert. liked the first fic. This kinda... bores me though.

Sorry but... it's bland. I hate bland. I don't hate this fic but the blandness of it disuades me.

Woe is me I can't decide weather I'm a guy or a girl!

...

Uh...

Well considering you were born either you technically should be whichever you want... or later in life, whichever the person who you love/loves you wants.

Thats that... end of story. Quite simple. For someone growing up with a curse like that, based on physicology this is the most likely result.

Bout' anything someone is born with is adapted too. Recently met a guy who had no arms from birth. He uses his feet for everything. The guy was like a monkey! Pickin up a cup o' tea with his foot and drinkin it!

Same deal. If your born that way, you adapt to the way you have to be. So, honestly, the most likely result is that, when s/he signs up for his/her drivers license or anything else, in the box that says "Gender:"

S/he would most likely put a resounding "Both" and wear a "** you" face to anyone who thought s/he was insane. Then prove his/her point.

Just my beliefs based on a bit of phsyic.
Jerry Unipeg
2003-09-03 . chapter 3
Ver good chapter.
Jerry Unipeg
2003-09-03 . chapter 2
Love the chapter.
Jerry Unipeg
2003-09-03 . chapter 1
GREAT chapter
Lipana
2002-11-26 . chapter 1
Goddammit! When the hell are you going to write a new chapter?!! It's been forever!
Ranko1
2002-05-25 . chapter 2
Pheeeew. Hm, I'll look at this thing rationally. Your writing style is good, and you are taking a big emphasis on emotions - which is (at least in my opinion) a good thing. Although I have to say that I haven't read the whole story, only the first two chapters. Up to here the story is good, but I won't read on, simply because I don't like storys dealing with Ranma's and Akane's children or anything like that. Hey, my favorite are Alternate Universe fics, so don't look at me !
Lipana
2002-04-22 . chapter 9
I want more! Oh, and some more guest appearances from some of the original cast as well as some next generation cast as well. Please finish this!!
Lipana
2002-04-10 . chapter 1
Having Ranma's son inheriting his curse and how he deals with it is a very interesting idea. I can't wait for more of this and I hope things work out for Ranma Jr. and Taiiku. They are so in love and I would really be disappointed if things don't work out for them.
Dragon Eternal
2002-03-30 . chapter 9
Oh.. I got this looovin' feelin' ! Lol. Kinda getting too mushy here... I enjoy it though.. .Good job with the chapters. ^_^
Astral Chronos
2002-03-12 . chapter 7
Im loving this story. I printed off chapter 7 this morning and read it durring school. Despite the interuptiosn (many people asking, whats that? what are you reading? blah >.
Daniel Kim
2002-03-12 . chapter 8
very sweet. This series deals with an aspect of the gender-curse that is not addressed in other Ranma 1/2 fanfics, with the possible exception of one that I cannot name. In that story, Ranma gets his curse rather early, and its effect is to change his gender at random. Going through puberty with a *highly* variable gender was extremely confusing for him, and he never really gained a strong sense of gender at all.

In this case, Ranma jr. has a male identity and self-awareness with female accessories. It must be quite a struggle to live like that.
Fafhrd
2002-03-10 . chapter 7
Well,
i reaaly enjoyed the concept of the first of these stories, Mother. Overall it was quite good, I did have some problems with Ranmas Acions later in the story, but nothing enough to keep me from liking it. In this story the kids are fairly interesting. I hope to see more, and more of ranma and Akane would be good, so that we can see where they are now compared to the end of Mother. Keep it coming!
Khimenko Victor
2002-02-03 . chapter 4
Cute story, but...

I do not like "Ranma as a total wimp" idea. Yeah, it's "different" Ranma, but still... Especially since he HAS all needed to be a GREAT martial artist (perhaps better then Akama): he has brain (it's shown in story) and he has speed and power (story iplies opposite, but it's HIGHLY unlikely: genetic is not very predictable when we are talking about braind and mind state but it's predictable enough if we are talking about physical prowess thus Ranma Jr (as well as Akama) should have above average endurance, power and speed - you can not have anything other with Ranma Sr and Akane as parents). I can understood idea that "Ranma Jr tried to be more like others and not be viewed like his/her bully-like sister thus abandon of martial arts" but he/she looks like TOTAL wimp in your story :-(

Plus Ranma 1/2 (original) is MARTIAL ARTS story (while non-marial artits like Nabiki are impotant seasoning in original story they are just that: seasining). Thus it's VERY hard to do convincing sequel without some serious **-kicking. And when in such story main character is some Gosunguki look-alike... Gah...

P.S. I do not imply that ANY story without **-kicking is bad. But you need somthing other then Ranma 1/2 to base fanfic upon. With Ranma 1/2 such continuation looks VERY unnatural. Alterverse - may be, continuation (especially where Ranma Sr is still into marial arts and even have a Dojo) - no.
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