Umm... Er... I will review because I respect your writing.. But, I really don't know what to say?... Hmm... Let's see, Ranma is kinda genderless I suppose and Akama is just now relizing that she is a lady? I only have one thing to say, I object to Ranma Sr. being tired from a match with his daughter. Lol, hey, I gotta find something to complain about right? So, how about making a conflict happen in the story eh? Like some person comes along and the old routine of 'Hey! You kidnapped me! Ranma's gonna kick your butt!' but this time, letting the Ranma Jr. come to Akama's rescue because the parents don't know about it yet or something... Well, I'm just a dumb idiot, so take my advice or no, good job. _

Cute chapter. Maybe a bit slow-paced, but I can guess that Akama's issues have to be approached with some delicacy.

Hey, I know this story is centered around the "next generation", but please give Akane a few speaking lines, now and then. Thanks.

Really nice follow-up series. The issues Ranma the younger has to deal with are about what can be anticipated, considering how he grew up. I assume, then, that Ryoga's children may turn into pigs (as suggested by the anime where Ranma goes to the future using the Nanban Mirror, and sees the children of Akane and Ryoga).

Maybe the elder Ranma could put a little emphasis on being proud of younger Ranma's academic progress. While he has common ground with Akama through martial arts, it might be a little unfair to praise Ranma'slooks alone.

So, do they have cousins?

very...interesting! Write the next ch. soon!

I thought you continue explore Ranma Sr feelings after birth. This follow up centering on the children 16 yrs later leaves questions unanswered dealing with Ranma feelings. In "children", why no more children by Ranma and Akane.

I have an idea for you... Couldn't Ranma Sr. go on a trip and get a gift for Ranma Jr.? Say a flask of Drowned Girl and flask of Drowned guy? Heh, it seems your getting Ranma Jr. all mixed up. At least this way your character evolves and meets the challenges of each form, guys, girls, clothes and all. Then after a while, Ranma Jr. could make the descision and change forever. Not to say your idea is bad or anything, but this could give you a good five chapters or so, at least if you make it short. _ PLEASE write another chapter soon!

*sniffle* This is so *sniffle* sweet. I tried this before but you are doing a much better job than I could ever do.

Very well laid out, I liked the description words.