yo seriously i read this until this chapter and i cant truly say that iam very impressed i have read enought stories on here to say i think your one of the best crossover writers out there and further more i must say the idea of using a predator was very unique and must comend u on that particular idea. anh how you have him look human and predator is very good also. tho from this chapter on i will suggest one thing and its up to you if u will but you should seriously have noaruto not stay in the village but be like jiriya but stay for longer periods of time until akatsuki is destroyed and also try and figure out a way for aliens to come into play and have the predators come back to the planet to see why one of their ships is functioning and even on the planet. all in all tho i love the story and look foward to seeing up coming chapters also if you would like to hear moer i deas u can email me at . have a good time and remember something that is written expresses more then any action or words could ever hope to achieve

great story so far u most up date soon

This is awesome. update soon and plz update often

ah...nothing like a good old butcher fest to get my day going...and also woot for the awesome dance!

This story will be great. I know it. Or, I know it will be great unless you decide to abandon it or something.

Another good story VFSnake. I'm not sure but i think that this is the first time i have reviewed your stories.

OH PLEZ UPDATZ MY FAV FIC FROM UZ SOONZ! =^.^=

a good chapter, while a bit short is very well done along with the acts, did like the naruto tricking everyone gives him a more tactical feel.
have you consider the suggestion from last time, having naruto hunting the women for his trhopy harem will give him a more pverted hunter style to him.
please take your time with your stories its better not to rush thing of, and ignore the flames there are more people supporting you.

ps: is it okay to give you more ideas for story fics on the reviews or do i have to send you an emai?

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome dances are...well, awesome. Anyway, another good chapter on another cool story. Welp, I'm off to read the next chapter of your Raven story.

Interesting concept. Can't wait to see where you go with this. I mean as powerfull as naruto is now, whats left? though I loved all the hinata bits. I could just see them sitting happily at home. naruto cleaning a skull. Hinata yelling at him for tracking blood all over the place as she snaps the neck of some entreprising hunter nin, while the little ones play on the floor with the dogs. aw.

Another excellent chapter as always. A very nice way you had Danzo terminated and yes I find the Sharingan arm Kishimoto came up with absolutely ridiculous. Very cool all of the Rookie 11 (except Sakura) and the Sensei's jumping in to help Naruto kill off Danzo and the Root. I was surprised you didn't write a small scene showing that Sakura stood by and refused to intervene showing Naruto her true feelings and nature towards him. The picture in my mind of Hinata kicking the crap out of Tsunade for being a piss-poor Godmother I thought was hysterical. And the Nara clan quote, classic! I think Tsunade is over thinking the situation of how to keep Naruto in Konoha. The answer is right in front of her, Hinata. She can always assign the Hyuga girl a seduction mission on Naruto. I hope we get to see one of your exceptional lemons in this story soon. Keep up the amazing work on this tale and I look forward to the next update.

very nice. Though if it becomes known Konoha is home to the shinobi killer that would make the other hidden villages more apt to make a treaty with them.

Love it! upd8 soon and i enjoyed this chap! keep it up and i loved shikaku's smart comment. lolz!

awesome indeed, update more