Why haven't I read any of these? This was very well-written, and interesting. Good job!

Again! Very little reviews for a well written story. It is becoming increasingly harder NOT to want to beta everyone's stories because of simple capitalization and punctuation errors.

Okay rant over. I loved the story.

I've always been facinated in the psychology of Devlin as he takes to Kevin's son. What must life BE like, you know? They man whose supposed to love you treats you like the scum of the earth and the people you've been raised to hate love you unconditionally. And you captured that to perfection. MORE than to perfection, flawlessly. It was a fantastic piece, well written and very heartfelt. My sincerest congratulations :)

-stray

Another good one, never seem to be anything less.

Pretty good..

It was very interesting, and with an all too familiar feeling of tainted pasts.

Good job, really :)