I love it! It's so clever! I love how you show how close the two of them are, and how you describe everything in such detail! You show the signs of a true writer, not to mention how evident your "voice" is in it... :)

Great minds think alike I see XD I've wanted to do the time that he was lost for a while but never got around to it. Once again you did a wonderful job! As soon as I saw it I had to read, I wasn't disappointed :D