A few things: 1. You write good, but to complicated. I'm afraid that some may not follow very good this way. 2. White foam? Really? White foam... Are you saying this is like rabbies? 3. At the end of chapter 2 where he says "Come with me if you want to live." That line sounds like something the Terminator would say. Other than that, that's pretty good.

Cool. Much better when you have time...so where's the next post!! LOL

Nice one Vincent. Keep posting! Hope finals are all done.

Hey. Vincent. Nice job on a fast update. With the way the first chapter started, I didn't expect the zombies to make an appearance so abruptly. But then again, most fanfics around here follow the same pattern, so... maybe it's just me.

Next... I like the Emily character, being a strong character and all... Would've been nice to see more interaction b/t her and Derek before the zombies crashed the party. Hopefully, this will be remedied in the next chapter.

Hi, Pretty good so far. I need a testorone filled story. This one appears to be heading that way. Keep it up.

Hey, Vincent. I don't review stories often, but I'll try my best. First of all, kudos on the punctuation and paragraphing. Not that I'm an English major or anything, but you may find there are some users around here that could care less of typos and whatnot. Next, the protagonist: He seems to be an alright character, so I hope any supporting players will be just as interesting. One problem I find with zombie flicks or fanfics, is that the main cast is often boring, weak and/or unlikeable. However, this may be more of a preference issue, so best of luck with that. Also, I noticed when characters narrate in whatever (books, movies, etc.), Italics are commonly used. But, if you're more of a Bold person, go for it.

BTW, will you be explaining more about the immunity? In any case, I'll be waiting to check out these "different types of zombies" you speak of. If I like what I read, I'll submit more reviews. If not... you will know.