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makealist
2009-12-22 . chapter 10
You write a very good Horace. I even recall the bit back when when he was cleaning his glasses/talking to Juliet . . . So, of course, plenty of Horace in this chapter, and it's all good!
FabyGinny05
2009-12-17 . chapter 10
Hi! I don't speak english very well, but i'm trying. So, if i have any mistakes, i'm excuse myself in advance xD

First of all, I LOVE your Sawyer and your Juliet! They're so in character ♥. Second, your humor is so... funny xD You have wonderful phrases and LOL scenes.

Your way to trate Daniel's love for Charlotte brak my hearth, by the way ):. And your Miles and your Jin (the scene with Juliet's chest! XD) are simply amazing.

Anyway, is just that i'm going to add you to alert and i'm waiting the next chap when you can write it ;)

Kisses! <3
eyeon
2009-12-16 . chapter 10
I really like this story. Minimal angst!

Don't worry about replying to reviews, just your wonderful story writing is great with me!

I like the girls all flirting with James!

More funny Miles bits, please! Are we going to find out how well Juliet manages that rum??

Have I convinced you about the other 1082 days yet :-) ?

Thanks, this is a fun story to read.
KaydenceRei
2009-12-16 . chapter 10
Aw.. poor Juliet.

See look.. I didn't abandon the story and stop reading I promise! My computer broke. makes me all teary-eyed.. but now I got a brand spankin' new one! Wo!
Aurora1020
2009-12-15 . chapter 10
This was a great chapter! Deb so has it bad for James! Too funny - I wonder what her reaction will be once James an Juliet are together? Can we get epilogue days once you finish up the 14? Haha :D I really liked how you portrayed the different reactions to Horace's offer. I can't wait for Day 11 - I hope Juliet starts to warm up to staying soon!
justawritier
2009-12-15 . chapter 10
awsome chapter. I love all the little things James does for Juiliet like opening a door for her and putting his hand on the small of her back.

“You first step should be learning her name, cowboy,” Sawyer said.

“Get Sawyer to help. That is your plan,” Jin added"

lmao! that was great.

Can't wait to see what day 11 brings :)
Korydwen
2009-12-15 . chapter 10
hi! thanks so much for the autor's note :)
again a great chapter! i enjoyed the little groupe's interactions. how they are forming a family in their own :) I wonder what will help Juliet to decide to stay... i 'm sad because it is already chapter 10 and it kept only 5 more chapter... it will be nice to go on with the 3 years :)
teh-Sara
2009-12-15 . chapter 10
Great chapter! So they've gotten the offer to stay...I wonder what will finally make Juliet stay. Can't wait to read more!
pani zagloba
2009-12-15 . chapter 10
thx for the update:) I was secretly hoping you'd include Horace's offer for Sawyer and the gang to join DI, and you did! great dialogues as usual, especially Miles' baseless boasting about having many girls overnight ;) great read!
eyeon
2009-12-08 . chapter 9
Fantastically great! Too bad I'm no where near as good at writing reviews as you are at this story. So many great lines, like the part about "seeing through me and resisting my many charms" or "better than Jack?" You have written this pair straight on perfectly. Oh and the "tension" stuff, that could be very interesting...

The season 5 writers couldn't have written it any better, so I'm glad you did, instead.

And I've decided there are 1082 days left, after the two weeks, because 1976 was a leap year :-)

Thanks!
justawritier
2009-12-08 . chapter 9
awsome chapter. The scene in the bedroom was sweet with Juiliet telling him that he's a good leader. . “Better than Jack, huh?”
“Of all I just said, that’s what you hold on to?”
lmao!
se34201
2009-12-08 . chapter 9
love it! cannot WAIT for more!
pani zagloba
2009-12-08 . chapter 9
great read. It was so funny when Juliet boosted Sawyer's confidence by saying he did better than Jack would have done. their conversation was so sweet:) and it's nice to see that Juliet is considering staying on the island. Sawyer's charm is indeed working ;] can't wait for the next chapter :)
Korydwen
2009-12-07 . chapter 9
i cant' help but smile :) i enjoyed their explanation and could sense the tension growing up between the two. Can't wait for more :)
justawritier
2009-12-03 . chapter 8
awsome chapter!
"Juliet felt a flutter in her stomach, and she struggled to maintain her professionalism. " That was great.

" Sawyer escorted Juliet over to the infirmary, helping her walk as if she had a serious leg wound, instead of a minor arm injury. She smiled inwardly at this protective side of him." so sweet!

Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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