Heh, this is kind of good! :) Just one thing: I believe you wanted to say "he wrapped her in a hug," but you wrote "he raped her in a hug." Raping someone is forcing them to have sex. Just saying maybe you want to change that.

OMG I LOVE IT!
CONTINUE LIKE NOW!

Aww.
Continue!

omg! i can't wait until the next chapter i really want to know what is going to happen you have to update soon or i will have a heart arrest

This is a really good story. It's a little confusing tho, I know that katie and ashley are mermaids, and bella, cleo, rikki and emma, but are reggie and aqua? because lewis said that this mermaid sickness could catch on to reggie and aqua. I'm also confused as to what this sickness is, i only know that it happens to mermaids...

I'm a little confused, are reggie and aqua mermaids? are ashley and megg mermaids? i know that katie is...

OMG
Is Cleo ok?
Continue!

Love it!
CONTINUE!

this is really really really good. I'm really excited for the next chapter. I hope that you can update soon

luv it can't wait 4 the next 1

luv it can't wait 4 the next 1

This book is really good! Hope you update soon!

I like how you atleast made Charrlotte a good mom because after all these years she isnt pure evil (I doubt she ever was). Perhaps the origanal mermaids will all make up and Ashley joins in on the secret

luv it can't wait 4 the next 1

Please update soon. I am confused, are Reggie and Aqua mermaids? it would be neat if all the kids became mermaids.