Wonderful!

I read this story a long time ago, and i loved it ever since! wonderful piece of work! Next time you write soming thing like this, really try to push the line in the torture, but overal, great!

I love this.

When I first started reading star wars fan fiction, I was hunting and came across your Father's Heart series. Mere words cannot describe how wondeful i thought it was. I was actually crying at the end. I really think its a darn shame that it didn't really happen in canon since I am a fan who belives that Vader and Leia deserved so much more than a few sparring contests and a torture scene. This story is another masterpiece and it fits perfectly. I hope that you'll consider writing out the Death Star scene. I would immensely enjoy reading it and I'm sure so would everyone else who reads your stories.

Yet another one I was glued to! _ I'll say right now I've never found an FFN author to have dialogue as well thought-out and advanced as this. I'm amazed!

If you ever publish anything, I'll be sure to buy it!

Hehe! JG I've found this on FFN! I read it before on vader's-mask, but on a whim, I looked for it on FFN. :P

I love the interaction between Leia and Vader (as like in Father's Heart) excellent characterization, great writing style! I loved everything about it!

Sky (Jedi_Mastre_Kris)

Wow. The interaction between Vader and Leia was simply fascinating. Great story. Thanks for posting it. :-)

That was good

My only question is how could Leia have been so clueless. Padme was her mother and Vader was obsessed with !

Whoa, that was good! Keep writing! :)

I liked this. YOu have a very nice writing style. Also it made sense. Now I wanna read more of your stuff!_ Thank You.

Princess Kabocha

Great story! Very well done!

Intriguing. _

Really well written. Both characters were true to the movies. I was especially impressed with Leia's strength and the fact that you didn't make Vader soft like so many other authors do. Great stuff!

Beautiful, painful and real. You write Vader and Leia like no one else.