A great story. Very good.

lol aren't gorgonites plastic toys for small soldiers?

LOLOLOL! that was great!gave me a much needed giggle after all these exams! you've gotta write more!

Very good! I thimk It should be continued

good job. Funniest part: the note warning of the spoilers AFTER the story.

I don't know how the episode "Birthday" could have inspired you to write this fic. That episode was actually good.

I thought it was pretty cool. You captured the characters of Angel and Wesley very well. Better than most other amatuer writers.