|Reviews for Rumble Fish: My girl|
| KissMyBassSutcliffe 12/14/12 . chapter 1
PLEASE CONTINUE! ID LIKE TO SEE HOW HER PARENTS REACT AND I WANNA READ MORE :D
| my oh mighty 4/5/12 . chapter 1
this was so cute, and well written too :)
if your still up for it you should make it into a story, not justa' one-shot.
also in the book it says rusty-james doesn't drink coke, only chocolate milk because it'll rot your insides. anywho doesnt matter i still loved it :D xox
| Trollin Blue86 9/8/10 . chapter 1
This is actually pretty good! Too bad that there aren't many Rumble Fish stories out there. Anyways, I loved this! This is going on my faves! Keep up the good work!
| Bella Phoenix MAC 7/22/10 . chapter 1
I grew out of Rumble Fish but I did create a character for my roleplays named Kristen McBail who became Rusty's new girlfriend. Great writing keep it up!
| AngelOfDarkness352 6/23/10 . chapter 1
this story is terrific! i love it! please continue! great writing! and maybe you could add in some lemons?lolz :P cant wait for next chapter
| fgh67 6/3/10 . chapter 1
this is so cute. you should make this more than a one shot :)
| Desertfyre 6/2/10 . chapter 1
Hey, awesome start to this story! I hope that you update and give up a full story! I'd love to know what happens; I am interested.
| LucyInTheSkyWithDiamonds27 5/24/10 . chapter 1
Please update soon! This is a really good fic so far!
| Guest 5/24/10 . chapter 1
wow. that was really go! write moreeee
| Maddie-Cakes 2/15/10 . chapter 1
I like this! I wish it was longer though because it would make a great story ).
| Birdgirl204 11/8/09 . chapter 1
I'm glad that you stepped up and had them make a Rumble Fish section. I'll have to read the book a few more times and try to write something. And no, this should not be a one-shot; you don't tell us anything about Macie or how they got together - this has gotta be before the book though, right? Since he's still in school and welcome in Benny's . . . and he's not in jail.
| dadssweetpea 11/7/09 . chapter 1
I LOVE THIS ! SO AWESOME GREAT WORK ...please make more )
| mais.CAPITALS 11/1/09 . chapter 1
Hey. :) The story is good although I have to say that its more of a story with multiple chapters rather than just a have a plot line going on here but since its just this one chapter,its not going a bit flat at times and I can't help but wonder where the story is headed.
Remember to add in a disclaimer at the top as well. (Disclaimer:SE Hinton owns all characters except for *name of OC/s*) That's just a formality but you do need to use 's some typos but other than that your grammar and punctuation seems to be fine.
Good effort!Keep going on strong and stay gold! :D