Hey there, so good to see an update FINALLY. Not just saying this for the sake of saying it but you're an excellent writer, and this was a wonderful chapter. Seriously. In such a small fandom, that's a rarity and let's face it the particularly good stories are few and far between. I hope that chapter three is out soon. I am very curious to see where this is going. Thanks again for the update, and great work.

I hope Shawn tells someone soon. The quicker he opens up the quicker he can heal. "The area around his right eye was an interesting mosaic of purple, green, and blue." I really liked that line. I also liked the fourth honeymoon line lol! Don't worry about the updating thing. I did the same thing on my first (and only) multi-chapter story after two chapters. It took awhile but I finally was just like, "I'm going to write this and I'm going to write it now!" Then I finally got a schedule going. Can't wait for the next chapter :D

Oh, poor, poor, poor Shawn! I hope they are able to help him ASAP! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh, this could be interesting. Poor, poor, poor Shawn though! I hope you update soon!

I can't believe you think anyone would flame you. This is off to an excellent start and the idea is incredibly original. Please update, I don't want this to turn into one of those fics that never get updated b/c you're afraid people aren't reading! BMW barely has stories to begin with let alone good ones. Keep going with this, I love what you've got.

Terrific start and excellent premise. I agree, there is not nearly enough BMW Fic and certainly not enough Shawn/Turner fic. I think what you have so far is extremely interesting and I'm curious to see where this goes. Please update soon!

I was really excited to see this because there aren't nearly enough stories with Shawn and Turner in the fandom! Poor Shawn! All he wanted was something to eat! I read a story where Shawn was sold into prostitution by his dad that was really good but it hadn't been updated in a LONG LONG LONG time! I'm SO excited to have found a story that'll be UPDATED every once and while! I'm looking forward to see how Shawn deals with this. Can't wait for the next chapter :D