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jcrudd.cook
2010-01-05 . chapter 1
that was effing hilarious- you had tonks just running the innuendo until Harry couldn't think straight! Way to go!
jojobevco
2009-12-06 . chapter 1
Good Chapter
saxcuL. the all-knowing
2009-11-23 . chapter 1
this is about the damn funnyist thing iv read
nim istar
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
HA!, great story.
hEAvEN's REjects
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
that is soo funny :)
Kwisatz Haderach
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
Brilliantly done! Very funny indeed. Thanks for writing this for us!
darklordmike
2009-11-04 . chapter 1
Nice work. I liked it, and it has quite a few good lines.

Tonks is a fun character, and the best part of the story is her complete lack of tact. She obviously likes embarrassing Harry, and they have a nice rapport. It will be interesting to see if you show us just how crazy she is in bed.

A criticism: Harry's characterization seems a little uneven. Why is he so terrified of hooking up with Cho? He blushes frequently and is embarrassed by Tonks' innuendoes, but at the same time he has experience with girls and has apparently done some truly kinky things with Luna.

Aside from that, it was a lot of fun. Looking forward to more.
Lord Jeram
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Hmm, this was pretty amusing, especially considering the time invested. Short and sweet.
WhiteElfElder
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
This was plain messed up. Granted, it was funny as hell!
Vegetto800
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Absolutely freaking brilliant! That was some of the funniest things I have ever read in an Harry Potter story. I hope you either continue this fic, or bring out another one at some point.

V.
Dark Dragen
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Good start mate, can't wait to read more PLEASE update soon.
bw29853
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
'Wow' Is all I can say..lol
Snapehater
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
lmfao well done great chapter i can not wait for more please hurry and update soon or when ever you like

until the next chapter keep up the nice work
Jits
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Great beginning ! ^^
Please hurry up with next chapter.
Paladin-kriss
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Hahahahaha, awesome. loved it
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