 jcrudd.cook 2010-01-05 . chapter 1 that was effing hilarious- you had tonks just running the innuendo until Harry couldn't think straight! Way to go! |
 jojobevco 2009-12-06 . chapter 1Good Chapter |
 saxcuL. the all-knowing 2009-11-23 . chapter 1this is about the damn funnyist thing iv read |
 nim istar 2009-11-19 . chapter 1HA!, great story. |
 hEAvEN's REjects 2009-11-10 . chapter 1that is soo funny :) |
 Kwisatz Haderach 2009-11-07 . chapter 1Brilliantly done! Very funny indeed. Thanks for writing this for us! |
 darklordmike 2009-11-04 . chapter 1Nice work. I liked it, and it has quite a few good lines.
Tonks is a fun character, and the best part of the story is her complete lack of tact. She obviously likes embarrassing Harry, and they have a nice rapport. It will be interesting to see if you show us just how crazy she is in bed.
A criticism: Harry's characterization seems a little uneven. Why is he so terrified of hooking up with Cho? He blushes frequently and is embarrassed by Tonks' innuendoes, but at the same time he has experience with girls and has apparently done some truly kinky things with Luna.
Aside from that, it was a lot of fun. Looking forward to more. |
 Lord Jeram 2009-11-03 . chapter 1Hmm, this was pretty amusing, especially considering the time invested. Short and sweet. |
 WhiteElfElder 2009-11-03 . chapter 1This was plain messed up. Granted, it was funny as hell! |
 Vegetto800 2009-11-02 . chapter 1Absolutely freaking brilliant! That was some of the funniest things I have ever read in an Harry Potter story. I hope you either continue this fic, or bring out another one at some point.
V. |
 Dark Dragen 2009-11-02 . chapter 1Good start mate, can't wait to read more PLEASE update soon. |
 bw29853 2009-11-02 . chapter 1'Wow' Is all I can say..lol |
 Snapehater 2009-11-02 . chapter 1lmfao well done great chapter i can not wait for more please hurry and update soon or when ever you like
until the next chapter keep up the nice work |
 Jits 2009-11-02 . chapter 1Great beginning ! ^^
Please hurry up with next chapter. |
 Paladin-kriss 2009-11-02 . chapter 1Hahahahaha, awesome. loved it |