*tears up* that was beautiful...

so heartbreakingly beautiful

haha, sweet tragedy! love it PS. Does usagi think mammoru is her doormat or back up plan when/if her relationship with seiya fails?
she is crzy!

hi, just thought I would say that the story was well written. But for me personally not liking the whole serena not with Darien. But I hope you continue to write, the story does show promise.

aw i cried at the ending. but it was a cute story too thnx foe sharing it.

Wow, what a beautiful and sad story. I enjoyed reading this so much. So heart wrenching at times.

Hope you continue to write more, sorry for my late review.

Take care!!

what how could u end it like this!
i demand, well plead u write a sequel w/ a happy ending plz plz plz plz plz!
!

Nice work

what a sad short story. good thou

it's not often that i stumble back to anime / sailor moon fics, but i'm glad that i found your story. i'm glad that you chose the ending that you did. while it's not the traditional happy-ever-after, this is a realistic spin on their relationship. great job.

I usually do not comment on fanfics, but I had to tell you that this was well written. I enjoyed the ending; it is different from what we usually expect involving Mamoru/Usagi stories. It is more realistic, so I applaud you for it. :)

AH! I ABSOLUTELY FELL IN LOVE!
i normally never read one-shots because i prefer longer stories, but this brought tears to my eyes (and down my face)
i am going to say i would love some sort of continuance of this story but i'll be content with this.
LOVE IT !

No Fin! Chapter 2 Please, With a And they lived Happily ever after to follow!
Explore each of their feelings... Usagi -in the series it shows she tried fequently to reach Mamoru
in America Letters, Phone no answer! Depressed , worried, fighting a new enemy, hiding her worry from her friends- feeling abandoned... And a "man" who looks like Mamoru and call's her Mamoru's old nickname for her constantily reminding her who is missing and has yet make any contact with Her ( yes I know he's dead BUT SHE doesn't) feeling abandoned...And the look-alike is showing interest in her...
Confussion is to be understood under those circumstances... Pluto reminds Usagi of Endy's love for her,
how about Pluto taking a certain Prince throught the time gate to show him everything his princess went through ( scouts dying one by one and no one for her to lean on while looking for any contact with him... Would he be able to accuse her of abandoning him if he had all the facts?...And Seyia didn't care to listen to the warnings to stay away from Usagi, He gets what he wants...Too perstant + an emotionally drained feeling abandoned Usagi in a middle of a war zone = into a unfair advatage for Seyia and Usagi to emotional trip and be pressured into making a major mistake...not given the time to think properly!..Chapter 2 please! Nice Prolog, now explore the key players feelings and make thier love unbreakable for it! Like a marriage councilor having too open the lines of communication Pluto can be that councilor when they understand each other fully their bond will truly be unbreakably...How can Usagi truly understand Mamoru if he still locks her out and doesn't pay enough attention to her.. Giving her an complex... Explore have the scouts help it's their happily ever after too, they also died for it! Several times...Besides Chibiusa already is in their memories , if she was never to born how can they remember her? So if they remember her she still has to exsits which means Mamoru and Usagi works this out and you get to write just how that happens! =; ) So please continue this ... Usagi's 18 so that's 4 years before
Crystal Tokyo and Chibiusa is to be born! And No Seyia can't be Chibiusa's father he's a she and you still need a man and a woman to make a baby! And Mamoru saved Chibiusa with his energy proving he' s her dad & when he died at the real ending of SuperS beging of Stars Chibiusa when poof litterally all pink sparkles cause half her DNA wasn't their too make her! So mamoru's the daddy...So wake him up so he can go get her mommy so she can be born and getvwith Helios.. He waited eons for a soulmate, it's his happily ever after too! Usagi's real mom died ( Queen) so she could have her happily ever after with Endy ...And She's waited eons to see it, don't dissapoint Queen Mommy Serenity I... So... When's Chapter 2 coming out us loyal readers can't wait! =; ). Thanks!

I really like this one shot. Nicely done.

needs a sequel...