wow. this definitely is something.

Hah. Don't you just love hockey rivalries? xD

I liked this chapter. You wrote the hockey action really well (I've never been that good at that kind of thing), and I was impressed.

Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next update! :)

Fantastic opening chapter! It's really good to see a new story up here!

This is really well written and it's obvious that you've done your homework on everything, and that makes it even more interesting to read. All the characters are believable and the storyline is excellent!

So if it isn't obvious by now, I really enjoyed this and I can't wait for more!

I like this a lot! keep it up! :)