Wow, using Novich as the bad guy. Great idea. I never liked him, he's a weasel.

Loved the conversation about Emme having a father, an uncle, a grandfather and a brother all watching out for her. Ha Ha. Poor kid.

Cute update. Hope to see another one soon.

Any guy would pee his pants when faced with his date's gun toting FBI agent of a uncle.

There is a scene in a Bones episode where one of the characters is talking to her foster daughter about sex and meanwhile her boyfriend is waiting for her, the daughter, in the hallway when the show's FBI agent shows up and tells him to behave himself around the girl after show the boy his gun. That scene was so funny!

Yay! Another chapter, a great one at that. I cannot wait to see how the story unfolds. Though, I have noticed that you havent been using contractions. It makes teh character sound robotic, little. Otherwise Fantastic, and I hope for more soon!

Pregnancy hormones are horrible. Don might just as well settle in for the long haul. It's going to be a rough several months.

Cute chapter. I laughed at Charlie yelling at Amita's father in Yiddish. Seems like he's going to be a VERY protective father. Good for him.

Nice update. See you again, soon.

Those rude four people! If they don't have a good excuse then I will hit them with my trusty cast iron skillet.

Charlie swore in Yiddish? :0

Really good!

I hope that you can update soon.


And don't worry about mind tricks, they don't work in the real world; unlike math :).

Great chapter! Hope for more soon!

Ahh, Marshall Penfield! The plot thickens! Great update with lots of excitement. Really enjoying this.

After Don leaved Colby turned to Don
i think you meant
After Don left, Colby turned to David

other then that great chapter!

UPDATE NOW! CHAPTER 11 MUST BE LONGER LOTS LONGER!

Wow, what a great twist. Loved the interaction between Charlie, Amita and Millie - but the ending was fabulous. A bomb! And David and Liz hurt! Bring it on.

nice evil cliffy, I like this a lot so far, lets see where you take it.

Oh, more please! SOon!

Nice, enjoyable read. I'm glad to hear Amita is going to spend time with the twins instead of teaching. That's the way it should be.

Question, I was wondering if you know how long this story will be? Is it planned out or are you just writing as it comes to you?

I am enjoying it. See you soon.

Update must know what happens next in NUMB3RS