Wow, this is brilliantly written. I really love how you managed to make those few seconds seem so slow. They should have done something like that in the game. It would have added more of a dramatic effect.
Anyway, I was almost brought to tears by this (almost, because I don't cry very easily), which is weird, because the end of Chapter 5 didn't have nearly as much as an impact on me.
But this-- this is amazing.

Okay, I'm babbling now, so I'll shut up. ;)

Cruel move, Mr/Ms/? Timeless.

How dare you write a heavy one-shot with humor in it that still made me cry?

You should be ashamed of yourself. Such a critical mass of awesome is illegal in most US states, not to mention forbidden in neutral waters.

I am appalled.

(I expect that if you write Monkey Island fanfic, you are not sarcasm-blind.)

Very good. The way you had Guybrush decide on his last words to Elaine just about made me cry.

I was totally floored when I played that episode.

That said, I imagine that Guybrush will be resurrected in the next chapter (I think his hand will re-attach itself to his body and it'll heal all his wounds, just like it did for DeSinge's wounds), but I could be wrong.

This is wonderfully written. It brought back all the feelings I had when I finished TOMI part 4.
You got Guybrush pretty in-character, I think--though I would really recommend that you play the earlier games, you're missing out if you don't.

...God, Telltale are evil, aren't they? I hope Guybrush comes back, otherwise I will be even sadder than I am now.

Excelent writing :D and very very sad T-T

I just finished this chapter yesterday night, and i couldn´t sleep well :S The ending is very shocking and happened what i didn´t want to happen >_< i´m soo sad ;-;

Thank you for share your beautiful version of the story, i liked the final phrase T-T, and i hope that you could complete the four Monkey Island games soon! they´re great! and very very funny ^^ hehe, personally i liked most the second one :P haha

You wrote very well about the characters, i liked it :D
I would like to see more fanfics about ToMI ^^
Thank you again! Bye!

P.D. I hope that this review is clear, i´m still learning english ^^U hehe

atte.
WeRa

Wonderfully written, the end to that last chapter of the game was quite a shocker! But I love how you've portrayed Guybrush in this, always the hero ;) Beautiful. Thanks for writing.