This story is relly gud. it's really heart wrenching keep updating please :)

Great chapter!!~!!~!! I love it!!
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Very good story! Update soon plz!

I love how you've developed Alice and Jasper's relationship within the confines of Volterra. :) Update soon.

Another great chapter

AAH OMIGOSH SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER! Can't wait for Aro to talk with Alice...she's not gonna be happy. I have this picture in my mind of Alice leaping at him for the kill lol XD compeltely impossible, but hey, I can dream XD!

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O. It'll be interesting to see how the guards relationships with one another and Aro are affected by Chelsea leaving. Renata already seems a lot more open. Although I'm surprised Aro didn't throw more of a fit about her leaving. She seems a little to important to be let go of that easily...
Despite that its nice to see that Aro isn't worshiped all around.

It totally never crossed my mind that these two would split, first fight maybe. Why can't they just kill Aro off?? He is a total control freak.

Really nice chapter. I agree that Jane and her twin brother, i forgot his name, but anyways, they do like terror, cause if u remember in the movie, New Moon, Jane had such a sinister look on her face, when she was torturing Edward, and well trying the same thing with Bella, but gladly failed. haha.

Anyways again, i liked this chapter alot. :) Good work.

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I am SO curious what he's giving her!
Very suspenseful I cannot wait for my curiosity to be quenched :)

wow. mean alice. gr.

Hm. Wouldn't Alice drinking human blood bring the endemoniado out? If so then Aro's stupid, and Jasper's actions make a little more sense... Course I could just be crazy.
I have a couple guesses as to what's in the bottle, none of them pleasant. Update soon so I can see if I'm right! Pretty please with two cherries on top! (Unless you don't like cherries, then none.)

Great chapter!!~!! I love it!! I can't wait for the explanation!!
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O ** Alice is mad. Nice chapter!! Update soon