|Reviews for The Moon Over Forks|
| aleshita-luvs-paramore 4/12/13 . chapter 1
OMG! this is a great, beatiful story, I can tell that just in this first chapter, Girl I'm happy I found you (wich was just by looking for some other thing on-line, by the way) Your story is really, really interesting and catching! Hope to get the end really fast, now that I have two of your amazing stories on the road...
| kmjl903clearwire.net 3/14/13 . chapter 12
I wondered when Edward noticed that Bella was running a slightly higher temperature, if this might not be the cause. He didn't handle the news too well, but I think they will both be really happy about a child, conceived in their love! Esme is going to love being a grandmother and Rose will be in heaven!
| kmjl903clearwire.net 3/14/13 . chapter 11
A wonderful marriage, with Alice and Jasper to witness. A little sad about Jacob, but he took it better than I thought he might. I'm so happy for them to be happy!
| kmjl903clearwire.net 3/14/13 . chapter 10
I'm so glad that Bella and Jake parted friends, pretty much. While it doesn't thrill Edward, it's important to Bella. Alice is all atwitter making wedding plans, the Cullens may be coming back to Forks and all's right with the world!
| kmjl903clearwire.net 3/14/13 . chapter 9
I'm uncomfortable with Bella going to see Jake, especially with Edward's scent all over her! That could trigger his phasing if he's angry enough! She and Edward are so good together, I would just hate for something to ruin this for them!
| kmjl903clearwire.net 3/14/13 . chapter 8
Considering neither of them had much practical experience, they did beautifully for their first time together! Loving your partner makes things so much better, in every way!
| kmjl903clearwire.net 3/14/13 . chapter 7
Once more to the rescue! Bella's right, if it's bad and it's around, whatever it is will find her! There was one silver lining in thatt cloud, though, now she and Edward are back together! From the wolf howl, someone isn't pleased at that. Tough, Jake, that's how it has always been!
| kmjl903clearwire.net 3/14/13 . chapter 6
That was unpleasant, having to tell Jacob her true feelings. Then getting a good look at the aftermath of Victoria's attack has Bella in a tailspin. That has to be the screeching tires she hears, and she's not paying attention to where she is! It's Alice's vision!
| Guest 3/14/13 . chapter 5
Okay, what did Alice see in a vision just before leaving Bella's house? I bet it wasn't anything good! Otherwise, she wouldn't have been in a rush to tell her brother what it was!
| k1942 3/15/13 . chapter 29
Max turned out nicely, as you would expect a son of Bella and Edward's to do. Being raised by a family of vampires doesn't seem to have hurt him any. It's too bad the Fork's police think he got his job just because he's the chief's grandson. I'm sure it's not the only reason. Max's parents are still in love and always will be, like his aunts, uncles and paternal grandparents. I'll bet if Max Cullen meets Elli Newton, he might find out local girls aren't too bad, after all! I hope you continue this story, I think it would be really fun to read!
| k1942 3/15/13 . chapter 28
What a stroke of luck that Edward heard Bella fall! The speed with which he got her to Carlisle probably saved her. This was so unexpected and happened so fast, it's a good thing Carlisle could change her and it happened under the noses of everyone. Scary as it was, it worked out perfectly, so they don't have to fake Bella's death. Even Jake is okay with her being saved this way!
| k1942 3/15/13 . chapter 27
That whole birth process brought back memories and even a few tears. It is such a blessing when a child comes into this world, loved and wanted! That was some epiphany Edward had about Bella's blood. Wait until he tells Carlisle about wanting to practice medicine!
| k1942 3/15/13 . chapter 26
Everyone is preparing for this child to arrive, not just his parents. Family and friends are looking forward to this little boy who's going to be so loved and wanted, and maybe a bit spoiled?
| k1942 3/15/13 . chapter 25
Oh yes! I'm loving this vacation Bella and Edward are taking! The pregnancy massage sounded wonderful, and it was cute that Bella tried to massage Edward! He did say it felt great, so maybe his skin isn't completely impervious. They both should go home rested and relaxed. I was a bit surprised Bella is having doubts about her change. Guess the baby makes it all different now.
| k1942 3/15/13 . chapter 24
That's the trouble with being pregnant, you get too tired to see in the New Year! All the Cullens had a great time anyway, at least it sounded like a lot of fun! Edward is the sweetest, most thoughtful husband, taking Bella to R&R in Laguna Beach! They might as well take advantage of this last opportuity to be a couple, before the baby comes!