Great chapter!

I'm really enjoying and it's nice to see all the team taking care of each other, ok...Grissom is exception here. I'd like to see more from Nick/Sara/Greg together. Update soon.

Greg is such a great friend!!

That was good. Although I was looking foreward to Grissom having a little chay;; Now make me smile... #7

Oh... more please!

Yay! Antoher awesome chapter though I want to slap Grissom...

Excellent chapter! Well written, with very good plot development. You can really stir emotions, as in, right now, I'd like to wring Ecklie's and Grissom's necks, LOL!!

I like where ur story is heading.Whats wrong with Grissom?Hope he gets every thing figure out,and make things better with Sara.I'm a big GSR fan!Can't wait till the next chapter.
Update soon.

THAT was a great chapter

Great chapter! I hope Grissom is really proud of himself and his lack of communication skills. I hope he feels like an ** now

Excellent chapter that moved everything along well, keeping everyone in character. Looking forward to more.

Ok, the waiting is killing me! Something is going on behind the scenes & I just can't figure it out! I am also worried about the reporter...I get the feeling that Sara has not seen the last of him. Please update soon!

Oh I'm having so much fun! I love this story!

THat was good. I hope to be readinjg more soon

i have a bad feeling about that reporter. can't wait for the next chapter.
cindy