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BronxWench
2009-12-09 . chapter 7
Duergar, golems, and siblings... Serena is going to have her hands full, isn't she?

Not to mention the Valsharess, and drow friends who can stir up more things than her drow enemies.

I am having way too much fun with this story! :D

Well done!
BronxWench
2009-12-03 . chapter 6
Ohmigosh, I love the conversation between Deekin and Valen. I am positively gasping for air from laughing so hard. I never get tired of that one... :D

Poor Tebimar...I'd be drinking too were I in his place. Between Matron Maeviir, Zesyyr, and Serena, I'm pretty sure he wishes every female would vanish and leave him alone. :D

Serena's song was lovely, as were her musings about her past, and her Anomen. Of course, Valen keeps sneaking into her thoughts, doesn't he?

Lovely chapter! :D
BronxWench
2009-11-21 . chapter 5
Heh. The dance has begun, although it would be nearly impossible for Valen not to be intrigued by Serena, a woman obviously as capable a warrior as he is, and and old friend of Viconia's as well. Her past wouldn't much scare him off, either, given his own heritage...

The talk between Sernea and Viconia was lovely as well, revealing her gentler side as she remembers her beloved Anomen.

Nicely done! :)
BronxWench
2009-11-18 . chapter 4
I loved how you brought Serena's past into this chapter so well. Having Solar intervene and have the geas removed before Serena wound up channeling the Slayer avatar was a nice touch, as well as having Serena wind up in her Pocket Plane again. I do like Cespenar... ;)

Actually, the entire scene with the Halasters was just brilliant... :D
BronxWench
2009-11-18 . chapter 3
Heh. Imloth and Solaufein just amused me no ends in this chapter. Gotta love those pretty drow boys... ;)

Serena and Deekin are a formidable pair, aren't they? Enserric has to get his two coppers in there as well. The humor in this keeps me grinning throughout.

And on to the next level... ;)
BronxWench
2009-11-05 . chapter 2
I do so love a good dose of ogres and fairies and drow... ;)

What I like about this is Serena's sense of humor, and the way she takes nothing seriously, well, except for the undead. She may have reached epic levels already, having whupped Irenicus and dealt with her Bhaalspawn taint, but she is pretty unimpressed with herself, and that makes her likable for me.

This is just plain fun! :)
MorwennaTheWicked
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Man, you're really on fire with two stories going at once!
BronxWench
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
I'm glad this is finally getting out there where it belongs, instead of languishing on the computer. :)

It's going to be a fun ride, isn't it? :D
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