Wow, this was funny and good. Ha ha ha ha. Suddenly gets serious as flames appear in the background. This is your ending for this! It seems like it was only just getting good, and you end it like this. Gets really mad and starts screaming. ANYWAY, I'm going to read your next story when it comes out, so until then Bye-for-now.

nice chapter oh and if you do the s class I'll still have my fan fict out there so watch it and Allen is working on yet another gundam fanfict and won't think twice about teaming up on you. as far as the treaty is concerned I found it the other day and I will still pull pranks and crap and depending on the mood I'm in will determine how severe it is. by the way e-mail me you lazy bum

hey great story and i want more MORE MORE MORE MORE!

hee hee funny. I like the whole pie thing. You can't have a comical scene without the traditional pie in the face. As always, good job. At least you are actually updating your fic. *looks sheepish* umm, I seem to have a problem finishing mine. oh well, keep updating, and I'll keep reading.

*moonflower*

aka floof

Thanks. The chapters took me awhile. I still have to type up chapter 11 and I'm working on chapter 12. I'm trying to get the fight scenes done right but so far, to no avail, I haven't been able to. Well anyway a brief sneak peek of chapter 11. Trowa and Wufei have a week of practical jokes. It's safe to say they avoid practical jokes towards each other but to Hedoe and the rest of the team. That's a different story.

Man, I leave for a while and discover that you have written four more parts. Anyway, I still think you should describe the fight scene, but other than that its a great story. bye-for-now.

Wufei should be in total control not saying whoa speedy other then that its great

I think you are doing a nice job. You have nice dialogues, and though I have only seen the show 1 time, you seem to have captured it fairly well. As for the rest of you fellow reviewers, I think some of you should be ashamed of yourselves. It is obvious that he has put a lot of time and effort into this fic, and it is his first. Every author deserves at least some respect for their works. If you don't like this particular fic, it doesn't necessarily imply anything on either your part or that of the author's. It just means that you don't like the style. Please only review things if it is constructive, or don't review at all.

*moonflower*

Oh, I hope you still read your reviews! People just express opinions differently, though not always in a liked way! (I know, it defines my life! *(;-P...) Well, I do hope you read your reviews, mostly because I want you to know that you are doing a fantastic job! Even Red Liger Blackout agrees!

(Strange Black Liger appears.)::ROOOAR::

Oh, quiet up, Liger. Go get back into your normal armor, no-one knows you unless you're red. Anyway, I hope you keep writing, this has been fun to read to the upmost! Best of luck, to you and all you write!

Man the torpedos, full speed ahead!

Later!

Phoenix (Keep up the fantabulistic work!) of the Cold Fire (Brrrr...*(8-O...)

Yikes! You're fighting mad. Anyway, I believe that people should be nicer about their reviews. Being new isn't easy, and those type of reviews are too discouraging.

As for the fanfic, I like where your story is going. I like how your characters are developing, but you need to work on the fight scenes. Pretty much, that is what Zoids are about, so skip them is like skipping the best parts of the fanfic. Other than that nice job, and I hope you continue with it. Bye-for-now.

I like your fic so far! i hope you decide to write more. Running out of ideas? Slow down a little, let them catch up. ;-P

::Reoaer::

Yeah. he means to say...all these upgraded Zoids, whats a poor original to do? I feel your pain, Liger...only, not. He-he! Keep up the good work!

Man the torpedos, full speed ahead!

Later!

Phoenix (No, Liger, I didn't really mean that...no, I'm not painting you white...What? You have a CAS system? ::faint::) of the COld Fire (Brrrr...*(8-O...)

Good, especially for a newbie, but a little hard to read and believe. I mean, if the Backdraft whale king was in the air, and Trowa's whale king was in the air why didn't the two battle. Why did Laon just sit by and watch his troops discimated, and how did Trowa know about the new Shadow Fox? Little plot holes like these can make or break a good fanfic, and if you continue to write you'll learn to not make these. Anyway, like I said before this is good for a first timer. Bye-for-now.