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HitTheRoad
2009-12-08 . chapter 2
this is impressive. i like the plot and the characters are really IC. love it. is there more? I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Marissa Davis
2009-12-01 . chapter 2
yay a new chapter! update asap i love it!!
PuckETTEandFredDOrkAreInLovE
2009-11-29 . chapter 2
awsome awsome just awsome xDD
make the next one son.
karazorel
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
Really engaging story. What comes next and when? Please update soon. Thanks!
Cassie Faith
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
That was wonderful! I am looking forward to more.

~C
more please
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
so happy to see a new chapter, I love your jalex stories.
tania1416
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
That was great!
She is going to help him with the baby.
I loved it
Please update soon
Bye :)
xLifeOfATeenx
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
its okay if its not long! please update! it's awesome!
xJamey
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
I'm sorry this isn't much of a review, but it's midnight here in the Phils and I'm tired as hell. Just wanna drop by and say this chapter is awesome, and Alex was just so sweet to choose to stay and raise Justin's baby with him. I can't wait to see where you're going with this and what else you have in store for us. Please update soon, I missed your Jalex stories.
oogajunk
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
Don't have time to do a legit review right now, but as always: Beautiful. F**kin' Beautiful. Everything about it. The way you drop hints to be clarified at the end (like the emblem on the envelope) to the strength instilled in someone by a newborn child. And I'm really getting behind the premise of this story.

Very few people I would choose to convey the hectic, overwhelming, and loving moments of the birth of a child (not to mention the circumstances [age, location, family, single parent, conflict between biological parents, etc]). And you are undoubtedly one of them.
vblum12
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
love this!
Mami.K.Always.Narnia
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
i love this one. keep updating,
Marissa-Xtreme Haley Fan
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
OMG! I just found this story and it is AWESOME! You HAVE to continue! I can't wait to read more! Please update SOON!
xLifeOfATeenx
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
awesome! update! cant wait to read this story! =]
xJamey
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
Aw.

This is such a great start to what I know is gonna be an awesome story :D It had just the right amount of angst with just a touch of the Jalex sweetness that we all love, so who could not like that? I'm kind of bummed by the fact that Justin has a son whose mom is someone totally irrelevant (IMO anyway), but I have to admit it kind of made my heart swell a little when Justin was having his "I'm a daddy" moment. 'Cause really, that's just adorable.

And of course, the Jalex. It's sweet that Alex has no doubt in her mind that she's going to be there for him, no matter what.

"He told her he was hoping she’d say that, and she felt a tidal wave of emotions she didn’t want to think about. Because she needed to think for once in order to pull it off. “Everyone’s going to tell you that you can’t do it alone, but lucky you that you won’t have to.”"

I loved that part. <3

Update soon, can't wait to read more :D
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