Not too bad. My only issue is that it's hard to follow them by their real names. It's alot easier for me to make the connections by the super hero/villain names. If you could refer to them a bit more by their heroic/villainous names that would be cool. But good chapter, I can tell that this story is going to revolve more around Crow, which is cool, because he's the one I'm drawn to most. Also, just as a suggestion, I would LOVE to see Beast Boy make a cameo appearance in this. Whether it was the comic or the cartoon, BB was always my favorite. Keep up the good work man, looking forward to the next chapter!

Peace, Love, Brandon Brownson

Good first chapter. It really set the mood quite well. I'd have liked it if there was more time spent on the other 2 titans (Crow and Robin dominated), and I think that you could have come up with something a bit more creative then Robin (Though as I think about it, nothing else would have really worked), but other then that, no complaints! Looking forward to Chapter 2!

Peace, Love, Brandon Brownson

Hm, you have a good start to what could be an interesting story! =)

If I may make a small advice? You would enjoy having a beta reader immensely - a good beta will edit any grammar mistakes you may have (not many, but there are few - but then, what writer didn't have grammar errors?) and challenge you with ideas and questions and basically force you to grow as a writer. You won't regret having a beta.

Another point is that Raven was somehow out of character with her outburst over her son being rejected for the leadership. She herself is a very shy and introverted person, not to mention an empath. From what I see so far, her son is similar to her, so I doubt she would be upset that Nightwing motioned for Robin to be leader.

Again, like I said, you have a good start and your characters seem likable. A hint: even if you don't get reviews, don't give up! Simply have fun writing your story, and your readers would catch on to that. Now that I have said all I wanted to, good luck and have fun writing!

-Talitha the Little Girl