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rindy713
2009-11-11 . chapter 1
that was fascinating. i was wondering how the experience would end. would the clock strike midnight and they be in bed together in the present? at midnight, would they find themselves just outside the door again? ah, a dream! that was a good way to end it too! i liked the last line about the bracelet; maybe that triggered her dream.
theweaknessinme
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
Oh-ho! I wondered how she was going to wake up! As soon as she smelled the coffee, I knew. PERFECT! I didn't clue in with the silver, but I should have. Well done! Loved it!
CIGHSVU
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
I loved it! Well done...awesome!
B R Cary
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Cute story. You should write Bobby's point of view to the whole incident. It would be interesting to see if he remembered the events as well. Keep up the good work.
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