OMG that was an amazing fic. The only thing that I noticed was Stephenie Mayer lives in Arizona not Utah. Other than that the plot was great for a oneshot. please do more.

I like Zogan and and hate Twilight so its a win-win for me.This was great but I wish you could have Logan kill Edward.

Erika! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing this. School and other stuff is just making life so damn busy now...

But anyway, this is so different from anything I've read from you...and I like it! :) I know you're not the biggest Zogan fan around, but I always love how you manage to write amazing stories about them! I'm also glad that it's starting to grow on you more now. Even though they were vampires in this one-shot, you still managed to keep them and the nature of their complicated relationship
in-character.

I really liked how there were two sides to Desiree: the childish, silly version and then I also liked the twisted, dangerous side of her.

Robbie was also amazing just because he trashed Twilight. Ha, there used to be a time when Twilight was actually kinda cool...back, before it became popular. But yeah...TEAM JACOB ALL THE WAY!

Anyway, great job on this story! Very different and unique!

Even though I'm not much of a Choey fan anymore, I still can't wait to read that one-shot you have up your sleeves. Hope you have that up soon, because I've been feeling pretty Erika-deprived lately ;)

-Maddie

Okay, a short and sweet review this time! Here we go.

M, delicious Twilight-bashing. Robbie has the right idea. I already love him, not kidding. And his "father/daughter" vampire relationship with Zoey is a really sweet touch. Reminds me of Patrick and Dana, don't know why. Maybe it's because it's that casual level of cuteness. ;) It's hard to picture a paler Zoey with blood-soaked lips. I'm picturing her in a Dracula cape now, acting like the Count from Sesame Street... yeah, can't take her seriously now. XD

I definitely approve of the Zogan, don't you worry. Fanfiction always makes it work, and I get that your Choey muse is down to a speck (if it's even there at all). I'm in a Chola mood these days, anyway. Also, the Zoey/Logan in this fic is actually really beautiful.

“Will you just jump my brother’s bones already? The Girl Code doesn’t apply in this situation.”

I love Desiree, and that line made me laugh. She's so blunt... Hm, what actress do you think would have played her if she had been a character on Zoey 101? Yes, random... You think Michael would have been best friends with Desiree? I think so... Shutting up now. Since I'm in a Michael-ish, Zoey 101 mood, I'm going to say that this was "drippin'" for your 105th fic! ;) Well done.

~Caroline (whoa, that wasn't "short and sweet" at all...)

love it but can u please write a quogan for me! please please =)

Wow, terrific job Erika. I really did think this was awesome. I love the beginning, with Desiree and Zoey. They are awesome friends together. Desiree seems more quirky in a way. And I love the VD reference in here. "Because I was bored." Ah, Damon... poor Vicki though, I actually liked her more than Caroline at times... what is Jeremy going to do? And Elena?

Robbie is even more awesome, bashing Twilight and everything. I really like him. He's older, but even more amazing and fantastic.

Oh yeah Katie, NEVER mess with Zoey Brooks, vampire or not. Zoey isn't even ugly. I bet Katie was before she died. Logan following Zoey is classic, but I love the bantering.

“I hate you,” she seethes, and climbs out of the third story window and lands gracefully.

“Feeling’s mutual, sweetheart.”

She contemplates slapping him, but still feels the ghost of his finger of her lips.

I love the whole 'Dad' thing between Zoey and Robbie. I bet he is like a dad, trying to protect a younger one.Desiree and her 'loveless sex' is probably true. She is just epicly (is that even a word?) awesome.

And of course, the LoganZoey was fantastically written. Nice job in writing it at the end that Zoey does have feelings for him after all, and it's not just unrequited by Logan. It would suck for Logan to have to live through those feelings for years. Fantastic oneshot Erika. I am so looking foward to more from you.

AU is right. Zoey a vampire...wow. I'm still not into the vampire stuff, whether it be the "Twilight" kind or not, but this was a great Halloween read, though the holiday passed just the other day. Gosh I can't believe it's already the third of November!

Desiree! It's good to see her again, though in a different form. She still has that wit and sex kitten persona - "I Find it cute sometimes - the way mortal boys are just so eager to get into my pants. If only they knew I was going to kill them right afterwards." - I can totally see her as a vampire and a sibling (or, half sibling) of Logan. Ah and she sees that Logan has a thing for Zoey...

Yay for making fun of "Twilight"! Robbie's opinion of it, very funny - "The tiniest amount of sunlight is excruciating to us, and this poser gets to *sparkle*. What the hell?" -
Ha Robbie and I share something in common - sometimes we get too passionate about things - "real or fictitious", lol. ;P XD
It feels weird talking about Zoey being a vampire, but definitely, because of her "Type A Personality", I can see her trying to avoid partaking in the vampire routine and not wanting to admit that she needs (and really wants) it.

Ooh Katie Peckerman...you should have NEVER messed with Zoey Brooks! Ah, and there's that Zogan chemistry! Pfft, sure Logan. Baby-sitting Zoey "really blows", and sure Zoey, you really 'hate' Logan. Hehe...

"Be home before sunrise"
"Yes *Dad*". XD

Desiree obviously enjoys herself. :P

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He's sitting there serenely when she arrives - about a minute and a half later, and just by the way the full moon illuminates his profile, Zoey can begrudingly admit to herself that Logan Reese is the most beautiful boy she's ever laid eyes on.
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Yeah...that's a nice mental picture. ^_^

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He smells like mint - the really nice mint after brushing her teeth but he has the potential to be stinging and Zoey just can't stand him but there's some kind of magnetic pull.
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Zoey and denial go together like peanut butter and jelly, seriously. Desiree is SUCH a great character, again I love her wit - "Great and I actually can't put myself out of my misery because I'm dead." -

Have I ever told you how much I reall, REALLY like your Zogan, because seriously, it is THE BEST!
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"Desiree told me you had her do it so I could live after I lost my family in the house fire. So, thank you."

Zoey lightly bristles, preparing for the typical egocentric remark instead she hears a, "You're welcome," his hand fins her much smaller one and it makes her feel warm, despite being cold to the touch. He lets a small smile pass through before he grins fully like the Cheshire Cat. His voice is low, eyes glinting, "Besides, you're stuck with me forever, Zoey. That's the best kind of eternity."

She smiles at him and laughs - it's all so very weird. "Should I be worried?"

Logan smirks back at her, "Yes."
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It's two in the morning, and she's kissing him.

He's cold and sharp when he kisses her back and inhales the scent of her hair, contrasting against her warm cheeks and soft lips.

(There are butterfiles in her stomach, however, and *this* is love.)
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Instead of Dan Schneider and Stephanie Meyer, you should be the one rolling in the money! Another piece made of pure mega awesomeness this was, I love your Zogan pieces and hope you write more. Hope you had a great Halloween Erika! :-D

-Haley

Erika.

Great oneshot for your 105th story.

I'm not a Twilight fan myself, or of Zoey/Logan.