Reviews for Origins
DreamWeaveBeliever 1/26/12 . chapter 10
A sweet story I love the building of the relationship and the worries of the young running into the burdens of the teen
Gatekat 11/1/10 . chapter 4
It's cool to see hints of the Ratchet I know and love already visible at this stage.
IronhideFan18 2/15/10 . chapter 11
the very last paragraph was so sad. You should a quick oneshot with the last Paragraph there isnt really a lot of ones dealing with that situation
iamtheIcestar 1/20/10 . chapter 11
YAY! Ratchey and Hide bonded! This was an awesome story! Keep up good work; I enjoyed it.
AceinWonderLand 1/20/10 . chapter 11
this was so good...i think i'm gonna cry.

(Gets angry) HOW COULD THEY KILL IRONHIDE, RATCHET, PROWL IN THE MOVIE! THOSE IDIOTS GOT RIDE OF ALL THE ORIGINAL BOTS!
OrianPrime92 1/20/10 . chapter 11
WHY did you bring up the tf movie! I hated them all dying! -sobbing-

WHY!

-in feedle position in corner-
Yami-Yugi3 1/20/10 . chapter 11
Aw I loved it.
xStarSaber 1/20/10 . chapter 11
Aw, yay! 3 Do more with them please :D.
iamtheIcestar 1/12/10 . chapter 10
You just must continue this! I feel so jumpy about what will happen to Ratchet and his relationship with Ironhide. Just a question, how old are they now? I just want to know.
OrianPrime92 1/12/10 . chapter 10
... Universe Jazz, '07 Ratchet and Brawl and TFA Prowl are demanding you update... -backs away from them slowly-

Screw it.

I DEMAND TOO!

SO UPDATE AFORE I THROW THINGS LIKE RATCHET! XD
OrianPrime92 1/6/10 . chapter 9
Dude, my Ratchet toy is pointing gun at you, demanding you continue. XD

Actually, so's Jazz... o.O I wasn't aware he was even reading this!

haha, Please update soon! -
IronhideFan18 12/27/09 . chapter 9
well chapter 1-8 was good, but when you put the roamnce in to this chapter.I did not like this love as in mate love or brother love.
AceinWonderLand 12/27/09 . chapter 9
AW! Clap Clap Clap.

This was so god, PLEASE update so. This is one of my favorite RatchetxIronhide stories.
xStarSaber 12/27/09 . chapter 9
Aww, bout time 'Hide! How could he not know?
iamtheIcestar 12/27/09 . chapter 9
The wait was worth it! I feel so happy that finally they confess their love for each other! Too happy! You must finish!
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