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I know why you left the end of the poem unfinished for without directly quoting the rest I will say I feel frozen...Frozen by pure awe and emotions I dare not name.

Your words invoke both great thought and great pain when understanding the very words you write and knowing I will never understand the inspiring muse, either demure or cruel, that prompted such bittersweet words to arise from your mind...Surely it also captured a bit of your soul and heart; although, I have no right to speak of such when I have no tie within your life.

Yet still your words have touched me...In fact, calling them words seems to be a rude slur for what true power you posses within your writing. Truly, you are a master with manipulation; by words or hearts, you twist all to your intended design-if there is an intention in the mode you use to express your means.

Now I am spellbound by your work and cast into a deep thrall of both respect and admiration...

Humbly, I look toward your next piece of art-no, of life, and eagerly await the time I shall be cast asunder by your power.

Oh. My. God. This was utterly beautiful. The words you used and they way they are used are just amazing. I'm an artist, and I never understood how writing could be an art.. But now I do. This was absolutely breathtaking, I'm in tears right now. No story on here has ever compelled me to write a review.. but this one did. My god this was just.. oh my god lol. Like.. I don't know how to explain it.. I guess some stories (?) are all about the destination... But this one was also about the journey there. The words twisted and turned and made it so.. smooth? I don't know how to describe it but this was utterly wonderful, my absolute favorite by far 33

I think my favorite part of his was the fact that you put my favorite poem into it. It was a well done story but Fire and Ice is what did it for me.

I'm in love with your writing style and most of your Kuro fics! x3

I love your writing but im sorry you butchered that poem. its a beautiful poem and you left lines out and mixed up lines and even if you ment it i still think it was butchering. but still your writing is beautiful.

another amazing piece!

Hello, it's me again! I've re-read this, and I think it's a bit too deep for me to fully grasp it. :\ Could you explain a bit of the last part to me please?

Ps. "Parish" should be "perish". Unless the mistake is intentional, and I've missed something..?

Wow. IDK why you said this wasnt good. It was more than good. It was phenominal. I wanted to cry. And your use of Fire and Ice was amazing. Just wow. Words cannot do what you wrote justice. Kudos.

That was beautiful.

I love how you compare the eyes 'claret supernovas'. It's so poetic and original I gasped and had to write a review. I love your writing, my dear. 3

Thank you so much for this! :)

Whoa. _

-and he feels it itching there,

at the side of his view

lodged, plunged deep, into the soft meat of his brain,

a little crunchy something at the back of his mind.

it burns like fire and it quenches like rain and it screams

[it SCREAMS]

like nothing else.

[Oh, dear, it's more than fantastic. Beautifully written, darling. Enjoyed it immensely.

Lovely, lovely work.

The poem's for you, by the way. A gold star of sorts, if you will.

Or if you won't.

senyaichiya]

Wow. That was beautiful. A great look at Ciel's inner mind and how he works. I especially liked all the references to how everything he is and has become is due to the events of That Day, the day he lost everything and made the contract. I liked the way the ending was written, beautiful and depressing.

well...the poem is pretty garbled...but this is an excellent fic! sorta haunting and scary and poetic...great job!

What deliciously dark glimpses you've given us. Thankyou for the lovely view _

Beautifully written. That is all I can say.

I love your style.