A sweet sequel. That Dean was thinking about Jo was a neat beginning. That he hesitated was very in character for him. But having Jo decide not to push him really tied it together.

I like that you made Jo independent and able to stand on her own. More than that I loved how you threw out there that normal isn't perfect for Dean. I think Jo pointing out that her parents were happy even though their life wasn't "normal" was very powerful.

The ending - that very last line was perfect. It really made me smile. Finally, Dean has a little hope.

love love love! great job!

Good job. (: Thank god you wrote the sequel. ;D Write more Jo/Dean. You're amazing. 3

Great job.

aww great story, I really enjoyed it alot. lol Ellen threatning him lol, spot on. I would love to read more from you. great job.

Absolute beautiful

Really enjoyed this! Love how Ellen had a go at him and threatened to drag him inside. The whole life you set up for Jo was great and I loved that Dean wanted a part of it. Thank you so much for sharing!