|Reviews for Schism|
| varee 4/7/13 . chapter 9
loved it. just.. update if you can. I'm really curious as to how will Rei (Raye?) name her son.. and how will Vegeta react, hehe.
the choppy chapter only added to overall tragedy of the last update, to be honest. it was amazing.
| minnieshon 3/13/13 . chapter 9
So it's this story on hiatus indefinitely?
| SailorDragon1 12/6/12 . chapter 9
Oh my god! ROF this story's on fire! I couldn't stop reading to take the time to review [sorry I couldn't stop reading] will Raye leave the arrangement to stay with her son? Omg, all of this is a masterpiece! With Raye's feeling towards Vegeta, it makes me wonder if she'll stay with her son. Awww, I can just imagine the little guy. With Raye's genes he has to be cute.
Now, is there gonna be more Goku/Serena? I ppppplllleeeeaaaaaasssssssss seeeee I kinda know how Gohan feels that Goku is gonna forget about ChiChi and that Serena will replace her. I read another fic where he felt that way. Even though his dad really loved her and, Goten liked her and thought she was his Tenshi (Tenshi equals Angel) Gohan was afraid that everyone would forget about ChiChi and move on like she never existed.
Now, other couples: I see the pairings already: Lita/ Raditz, and Mina/Turles. Interesting :]
I'd like to see how those relationships develop. :]
So gr8 story, please update.
Sincerely A Dedicated Reader,
| SailorDragon1 12/3/12 . chapter 1
I smell genius! XD
I'm in love with this story, I only read Goku/Serena or Gohan/Rini fics.
| Remelia 11/3/12 . chapter 9
ohh poor rei has a baby of vegeta D:
a question here there will be romance?
come rei you can )
I hope the next chapter
i like you history
| ChibiSilverShadow 10/3/12 . chapter 9
I have read up to this point, and love it so far. I am looking forward to your next chapter. I must say it is nice reading something different from tihs time line. I am curious to see what happens next.
| Rena H.M 9/20/12 . chapter 9
Hugs* Thank you for the update! It was very good. Lots of action! Rei had her baby! She is a mommy! :) Maybe Vegeta will warm up to her now that she had a baby. I can't wait to see if Rei and her baby made it out okay.
| Efyraa 9/19/12 . chapter 9
AH! LOVED IT. The invasion, Raye's labor everything! So glad it was longer than before because I had more to read! As usual, your description and fluency is out of this world. Poor Raye, but yay for the baby boy being born! And Vegeta's becoming a softie? Yeah, I'm sorta suspicious about that :P
In reply to your response to my review (lolwut), character torture is fun which is sorta demented in some sense but whateverr. :) And thank you! Once I settle in university, I'll totally hit you up with an idea I have! Thanks for offering :D Update soon! Sorry I haven't got much to say, it's sorta late and I'm sorta dead. :P Have a good day x
| Whiteling 9/18/12 . chapter 9
OMG, Raye just gave birth! And Vegeta's planning to release her from the arrangement? I can't take the suspense!
| Lina Hino 9/18/12 . chapter 9
In a way I am glad that I waited to catch up but also I regret it
I love that you are staying strong and working on this
Seeing review responses, I also SO glad that I'm not the only one who tortures the characters they love
I can't wait to see what happens next and to see if Rei survives the birthing process as well as her reaction to Vegeta's message
| Jewlbunny 9/18/12 . chapter 9
YAY! The baby's born! I wonder what his name is going to be. Bardock maybe, because of the kindness he shows her. I like that Opal covered for Ray. I might need a Beta reader, I'll let you know if I do. Please continue writing.
| Efyraa 9/10/12 . chapter 8
Welcome back! :)
I loved this chapter and I don't care if it was shorter because it was awesome and consisted of a good plot growth. I like how you brought Bulma, Krillin & Yamcha into the story - things should get interesting now. Lol at Goku's never dying optimism and Gohan's intellectual contributions to make up for his father's lack of thought. But what got me the most was poor Raye. The girl just can't catch a break. Married to a horrible heartless person, carrying THEIR child and having lost the one thing she became close to. Loved this and cannot wait for the next update. Btw, do you beta?
| Rena H.M 9/6/12 . chapter 8
Oh wow. A lot happened in this chapter. It was interesting to see some of the other Z-crew show up. I think it would be neat to see how it all fits. I cant wait to read more. I can't wait to see what will happen once Rei has her baby. Keep up the good work
| Jewlbunny 9/4/12 . chapter 8
Oh man, I thought that Goku told them about the Dragonballs. I like the plot twist, but then again, what DBZ without Krillin and Bulma. I don't care about Yamcha. I hope to read more from you soon. Please continue writing.
| CosmosAngel 9/2/12 . chapter 8
It's pretty... unexpected to see Krillin, Yamcha and Bulma. We do not expect it. I look forward to more. But, if the crystal balls have survived the explosion of the Earth, this means that Kami and Piccolo are alive too?