I think that it should be a happy ending with Allen surviving his cancer and Yu living with him.

I would like to say happie buuuuuut this time I would like a sad ending, I'm kinda thinking Romeo and Juliet but whatever's fine, along as it's sad. Ya... I feel like reading something depressing!

I want a sad ending!

YAAAAAAAAY! I LOVE bittersweet endings! :D Make it a good one, a REALLY good one. :33

I write to you in pain. I live my life painfully all the day each day and it is painful to read the story of the two of them who love each other so much but you know that one will die. I will tell you your story can change houndrets it could change thousands if it was published somewhere else. But even if you write a sad ending and satisfy you way of living... A living in a total dark without a sun. You cannot take their happy ending out of us. They will live together healthy happyly in our hearts and souls till the day we die. This is one of the fewest fanfiction storys I read and it is astounding, breath taking and hard to hold tears back. I just want to say, may it be happy or sad ending the story in our hearts is already written and you cannot change it unless you change yourself.

really sad TTATT i almost cry when i read this fanfic.. TT_TT

BTW i choose happy ending ofcourse! XD

My god, I don’t know what to say seeing as though I’ve still got fresh tears in my eyes. But in all honestly it was beautiful! It was so sad, but I love it.

I'm lazy to log in but the story is sad and lonely. I imagine too well TT_TT. Nice story by the way

Ok. I admired you for finishing this story, so I'm going to give you my honest opinion. I think that you deserve it. I'll start with what I liked about it. I really enjoyed the story plot. I always like reading story with aganst in it! I was disapointed in the beginning when you straight out gave away he was dead. When I began I was exited, thinking,"Oh! whats gonna happen?" then I saw what you wrote and was like,"he...died?...oh...?" Also, the emotions didnt really reach me. When I read this about a terminally ill Allen, I expected them to convey constant worry. He coughes. They know he has that illness. And the reactions kinda seemed like he was a annoyance or something. It was rushed as well. Like when Kanda followed Allen home. Who in the world would invite a person they just met, with seemingly stalker like qaulities into their home...? Sure as hell not me! In that situation, I would probably be like, "Dude...why the hell are you stalking me!" You know, then wheel my ass outa there! Also...when allen asked him about the doner. If you just came to the stunning revealation that you where in love with him, wouldnt you fight him to get one? Love is not all about caring for what the other wishes. It makes you act selfish too! The smaller detail was the grammer. It kind of bothered me that I had to mentally corrct everything you wrote every sentence. Wow... Do I sound like a total bitch...? Probably. Practice your writing and im sure youll improve! Goodluck!

i don't mind it too much, but i'm not exactly applicable for this site's beta thingie.
BUT.
I am more than ready to give out my e-mail (i need some online contact, too. even hermits need friends) so we could do that. i'm a grammar person, bad grammar ticks me off really badly. i'm cool with both het and yaoi, and i'm fine as a sketchboard (lol).

Ah, so it's finished...really sad but I liked it! _

I would absolutly love to be a beta reader I'm good with editing and I'll read just about anything! I love you writing and it'd be awsome to be a beta reader!

hm well i would like too but i havent been on fictionpress before but im good at grammar and i have knowledge on kinda alot of anime/mangas but i dont know if you want to take a chance with me or not so its okay if you dont cuz i dont have experience with being a beta hehehe :D

Me! I would fit this description! I know many types of anime and have no problem with vocabulary and grammer. And yaoi is not a problem.

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