The end is incredible, and overall the whole poem is very cleverly written, you got right in Ziva's head, I love it!

I liked:

'For the truth in lies'

Its clever the way each line has something special, a unique quality with something to make us think about, its really good, and pure talent :)

I'm just glad you are using it!

It would be great if maybe you could write some sort of sequel to this poem, although I see how that would be hard.

Even if you don't, I still loved it, made my day just to read another of your poems!

Love you

x

Very good for poetry.

I may not be talking to you on msn, but i figured not reviewing was just harsh :P

I ADORE this. I've read it before (?) i believe, anyway. I love it so much.

So glad you posted, you are a writing genius and i hate you :p

x

Beg? You? I don't see why you would need to with your talent. Another great poem.