sueki has died, so you can expe- justkidding!

yeah, that was awesome. Im stoked to see what cerebral is hiding from gemini the most.

Typos...

Yes, yes, yes. More glorius action!

Damn, considering how great you made the Lord of Ragnarok out to be in previous chapters, he actually seems relatively weak now. Sure, he’s stronger than everybody, but he just seems far below expectations.

No matter how long your chapters get, Sonic Blast’s “Full Metal Madness” still stands at 13,000 words, far more than anyone here is even willing to attempt. I’m too scared to even go past 2,000 without ending a chapter right then and there, otherwise- and some pretty high-end authors and critics proved this- people wind up losing interest after a certain point.

hold up silver is geting cool aoas!

best battle ever! that part where silver put marines blood back in, cool! that’s the second time ive ever seen silver do that!

I’ll give you this: The action, description, and dialogue has certainly improved over the first fifteen chapters. There is no denying that.

Silver’s ussdenly getting badass

that battle between Typhoon and Silver and Marine was intense!

Yes, Typhoon WAS pretty cool. Also glad to see the reappearance of Cyrus. And don’t worry, I will be here for the remainder of the story!

i kinda miss team dark

dusk sonic i like that

Go Blaze, Go Sonic, and ... Dusk Sonic eh?