This is really interesting so far, I like the premise of the story and the idea of the Roses. You've kept the Elemental Gelade characters really in-character and the action is well-paced. Keep it up! :D

It's sad that everyone just wants to kill Coud... oh well! I love this! If you're still taking requests for oc's can you put my 2 in here? if so just shoot me a pm and I'll give you their bio's ;D

Nice to see an Elemental Gelade story. You do the character's really well! I'm expecting great things from this story.

I have to say I am hooked. I love the historical allusion to the war of roses. Concerning characters, I wanna see something new, I love the Edel Raids already out there but if this is an island of some of the most powerful Edel Raids than they must have really fantastic powers.

I'm HOOKED! Can't wait for more.

Damn, very nice!

Plz continue!

I loved this chapter though it was a bit short. Please write more! More people who need to kill or capture Coud! YAY!

Please keep going with this, I like where it is going.