I thought the story was good, and it was well written. You had everyone in character and it was sweet watching Eric look after his wife..
But, just my opinion; I don't think you can get sick off of one not even compleetly drink of alcohol. just my thought..not saying the story was bad..I just don't think she'd get that sick on just a little alcohol..at least I never have..but that's me..I guess some people can be different..
The story was still a sweet one..

Aww.. XDD

Ari chan

Hmm, this was an interesting story, Lauren!

I thought it was a bit odd how quickly everything happened, though. I suppose mermaids might not have much tolerance for alcohol though, lol. Still, she got hung over rather fast! I drink sometimes and I've never seen anyone get hung over only half an hour after their first drink! The one time I saw a reaction like you described here, it turned out my friend had the flu. I hope nothing else was wrong with Ariel! Will she be OK?

It was a very nice story, though. I enjoyed reading it.