 b4k4-san 2009-12-03 . chapter 1Big fan of this story and the two predecessors as well. It's definitely got a bit more going for it than the other K-ON! fic I've been reading, plus this one is more likely to update.
Speaking of which, please update XD |
 SouthpawSwordFighter 2009-11-10 . chapter 1Grar, being an idiot, I keep missing all the Japanese anime/manga/movie/music references and allusions. I should really do something about that.
This chapter is so nicely light and fluffy. It's also rather dialogue-heavy, which is not necessarily a bad thing (especially since it's well-written). But for some reason, I find myself liking the first chapter of Adagio the best, still. Maybe I'm just a sadist who can't handle happy, confirmed relationships? Hmm... I will have to ponder this further and let you know...
I don't know what "recommendation" means either. ...What is it, exactly?
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
~Southpaw |
 cowpoo 84 2009-11-05 . chapter 1awsome as always! keep up the great work! :) |
 Yasue 2009-11-05 . chapter 1Superb imagery! I can actually imagine Mio slapping the wallet at Ritsu's face and Mio kissing Ritsu among other things. Your grammar and spelling is good. Hoping for more chapters! |
 djyxa..i know it's me again XD 2009-11-05 . chapter 1 hey! i forgot to say!!
this extremely long fic.. this...this! is the first time that i read all from top to bottom! you keep me interested! i'm congratulating you for this!!
what a great job! :D |
 djyxa 2009-11-05 . chapter 1sugoi! XD
i love RitsuMio fluff!! :3
hohoho~ please update soon! :D |
 UC. 2009-11-05 . chapter 1 Yay, the sequel's out!
I was actually expect the chapter title to be Adagietto, but this one's still nice.
The "Are you coming?" thing just made me burst out in laughter, XDD No matter how many times I read it.
Plus, I really love that kiss and the fact that Ritsu wouldn't get one for a week if she laughed. :D
Thanks for the hard work, please continue! XD |
 Ascoeur 2009-11-04 . chapter 1YAY THE SEQUEL IS HERE!
It was another very, VERY long chapter. I was about to go to sleep when I found this at the top of the K-ON archive and thought to myself: "Oh my gosh, I've got to read this! Besides, I still have ten minutes before bed." Then I fell backwards at the length in complete shock --> O_O . . .
I LOVED the interactions between all the characters. Particularly Mio and Ritsu, since you didn't make them suddenly all mushy and lovey-dovey towards each other. It's just like the old days.
I still don't see the plot (if there is to be one) but even if there is none, isn't that what K-ON's about? :D
I await the next chapter! ^^/
PS: I noticed how the title for your K-ON fics are a bit odd. Are they words in another language? Adagio... Arpeggio... What's the meaning of it? :o |
 Lilian Kate Mazaki 2009-11-04 . chapter 1very nice work! really! all of you k-on! fanfictions so very pretty. MioXRitsu so goog. Good Luck! |
 ZIIIX 2009-11-04 . chapter 1Well you have me coming back to your stories again, so I'd say your making me a regular here on K-On ff. Now I just need to write something, but I think your and another's stories are giving me ideas. What to do with said ideas is what I need to work on...
This submission had me so excited I knew I couldn't read it all in the morning so I emailed it to myself to read in school today (they block FF for some reason...)! It was confusing at first, but I became fond of the way you jump around in the timeline when writing, and I then can piece together areas myself so it makes sense. Our two lovelies are in perfect character I think, even when getting romantic, so that's always a plus in my eyes. Banter between characters in general is spot on, and I laughed at numerous points in this chapter.
Oh and the mentioning of the Pillows, no matter how random, was much to my joy. Favourite J-Rock band, so pay no mind to splurges of fan-ness.
"'Fine, fine. Anyway, so are you coming?'
'What?! I thought I said that—'
'Huh? I only asked—oh shit—no, I didn't mean that! I meant as in over—coming over. To the arcade!'"
These lines, no matter how lewd, made me laugh a lot, much to my surprise. a lot of humourous moments in this.
Well that's about all I can say at the moment. Keep it up! And don't go trying to break your record on updates, or heaven forbid MY record! |
 RtDK 2009-11-04 . chapter 1Well, let's dive right into it, shall we? (Got my squeeing out of the way earlier when I saw the email alert. ^_^)
>>"Be careful!"
>>Mio laughed in embarrassment and gestured she was okay.
Simply, I want you to cut this. I know it seems like such a little thing, but it's really all just filler.
>>"…and she was reading shoujo."
OMG! O.O
>>His exclamation was filled with such shock and dread, it was as if he had caught her smoking.
Don't bother making this a new paragraph. It relates enough to the previous dialogue that you can just leave it all together. (Trying to cheat on your page count, huh? For shame. ;) ) |
 THIRD-IMPACT-end-of-humanity 2009-11-04 . chapter 1About damn time! I was waiting for this third chapter! I like your writing so far, nice, clean, and IC. I hope to see more of this in the future. |
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