I rather liked this. It was simple but at the same time had a very complex tension (especially with these two and they're sexual frustration xD). It's always enjoyable to see things that can seem a bit to far off broken down so that even a kid could understand it. Lulz... Anyway. Good work. I approve (not that my approval really means anything x3).

Wow. :) Simply wow. As you said, I loved it.

E White.

Very cute and fluffy:)

That was well written, I really liked it