man forget this guy, freedie is the only guy 4 sam

Ham? JKz

aw!
por you guys...
this is depressing dude!
you need to make things all lovey dovey :P
x

kool so creddie with Carly's reaction! UPDATE!

REally cute! UPDATE!

Haha, me again!
Methinks she put in something like "Meet me at blahblahblah" or "We should hook up later" etc.
Who should she send it to? Exs... Griffin? Jake? Shaun? That'd get to Sam, I bet. Maybe Nevel if she's UBER desperate.
So many theories...
Anyway, there's only one thing I have to critique, and thats the drama. Maybe its just me, because I'm a drama addict, but it's not dramaish enough lately to me. Too happy and perfect, maybe.
I don't know, I'm a little cynical maybe.
So yeah, fun and cute, but amp up the drama!
-Gen

Funny how you ask for reviews when you havent reviewed one story on your favs list. Hyocritical.

You want a review? ur story sucks so bad and you should never be writing fanfiction. People who put themselves into stories are lame, especially when they can't pull characterization off at all.

I DON'T KNOW!! UPDATE!

this is awesome dude :)
i am liking how you did this :)
update!
xx

YES duct Tape lol

hahahaha
this made me laugh :)
i liked it mr zexar
update soon yeah?
well you did say you have like 50 chapters! :L
xx

Good Chapter this story is 2 cute JKZ UPDATE!

Haha, I started reading the review at the top, and was thinking, "This sounds so familiar," then I realized... That was me! I felt all special :)
Another chapter, another happy little me! Shamron :D
My only problem was: Where did Freddie go?
Or maybe this is your master plan, and he was with Shelby the whole time.
Or murdering someone, I don't know. Whatever floats your boat!
Other than that, cute and fun chapter!
- Gen

Oh, my god.
I love your story so freaking much, please update again soon! Like, now maybe? Seriously, I know it says to give critique but the only thing I can ask is for more Samron!
I love them so much I gave them a name,
I don't know why I want them, but I think I must have some sort of fetish for jealousy and the couple I want to be together not being together when you know they should be together, you know?
It's like Sailor Moon - If you watch that, maybe you don't, still - When at the start they fight but you know they'll get married, and then he turns evil and, I dont know, I just LOVE that, dont you?
I'm rambling, I apologize.
I'm a Seddier, I must admit, but I just love that they arent together. Like, in your story, when Shelby came I was like YES, SEDDIE. What happened with the Shelby plot, by the way?
So, anyway, only critiques would be: More Samron, ShelbyxFreddie (Sheddie?) etc. for more Seddie.
If that makes sense.
Which it doesn't.
Not really.
ANYWAY
I'm deeply sorry for leaving this very long, pointless, rambly critique, but just saying: I LOVE YOUR STORY.

-Gen

yup sounded proffecional i can't even spell lol UPDATE!